[AA2] Tomb of the Mummy Priest
Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
Awesome.. let us know what you think.. if you see spelling or grammar errors let us know as well.
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Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
I only glanced over random bits of the text, mostly checking out the monsters and treasures (by the way, great treasures); I found some typos on p5, describing the treasures in Area 9:
- "contains1,700 gp" -- missing space
- "Set next to bags" -- missing definite article
- "headdress that is functions as" -- superfluous "is"
Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
Thanx.. I've got these fixed but I'll hold up posting a new release in case we need more fixes.
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Why? Go ahead and release it. "Release early, release often" is a mantra of power in the Open Source world for a reason... it's good for the project.
It's all just bits, after all.
It's all just bits, after all.
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cause I'm lazy?
It was just one paragraph so I thought I would see if anymore came back.
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Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
- The Tomb, correct to "...the carelessness of Aram's men"
- 2. Main Hall, correct to "Characters that inspect..."
- 9. Ritual Chamber, Treasure, correct to "...is the bandits' ill-gotten"
- 2. Main Hall, correct to "Characters that inspect..."
- 9. Ritual Chamber, Treasure, correct to "...is the bandits' ill-gotten"
Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
Changes made and new file uploaded! Thanx for the help guys!
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Re: Tomb of the Mummy Priest
So its been awhile since I last checked this thread out and I am wondering if anyone ever actually ended up using this adventure? Anyone have any words on how it can be improved?
I am also thinking of making some changes myself but I want to hear some feedback first.
I am also thinking of making some changes myself but I want to hear some feedback first.
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My group is just a bit too high for it..
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