Chrysogon's Coterie - 288 NPCs for your Campaign

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I suggest another once-over proofread as well. I'm always surprised by how many things I miss the first or second time through, no matter how thorough I try to be.
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JugglinDan wrote: Sat Apr 22, 2023 9:51 pm I'm always surprised by how many things I miss the first or second time through, no matter how thorough I try to be.
Once or twice for me would be amazing. Given the number of revisions where it was me correcting myself, I'm slightly embarrassed by how many errors were still found by other reviewers in between.

Ideally I'd like to make fewer mistakes as I go, but my brain just isn't like that. I think faster than I can type and generally just try to capture as much as possible in the first way the ideas occur to me.

It gets easier with time away. When I look at material I wrote 10 or more years ago, I can see my style in it, but I can read it with stranger's eyes again. My two Workshop pieces are too fresh.
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So are you waiting for me, or are you doing more proofing?
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You said you'd let me know when you were ready. The document is checked in (post 1) if you want it. If not, I'll keep managing it in the meantime.
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Okay, thanks. I will let you know; I'm not ready yet as I'm focused on the core rules.
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Sounds good. Maybe Al will have time for a look.
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Is there a letter size front cover ready for release yet?
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There is a cover, but it needs to be updated to the current license and placed on the Downloads page.

That old cover was uploaded here: https://basicfantasy.org/forums/downloa ... hp?id=6371
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This should use SoutaneBF rather than AdventureBF font; not sure how much it would screw up the layout...
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Hey, what's the current status on this one? I'm working out the 2nd Wave priorities and I'd like to know if we can completely finish this in 3 or so months. If it's ready for me to look at, please let me know.

BTW with respect to the font, Chi is right, but don't worry about the layout because that is as always my problem.
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