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Dunno about Leon but I'm good with it. I'll be out of updating for a couple of days now, so if you have fixes for R21 when I'm back that would be excellent!
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Yeah, go for it, Al.
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I have done a new cover layout with some of the missing stuff added back in (code and descriptive string) with the gray band and the title font Rocketfuel that you requested. LA1 is the "normal" code since I usually use initials, but if you have another preference I'm agreeable.
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Love it!

I don't have a strong preference for product code. LA1 is fine.
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I'm building an R21 right now. Anyone proofing R20, just post your corrections here as noted above.

Leon, I've integrated the four images you tagged to replace the gray boxes. If you want to fill in white spaces, feel free to post a list here for me. Also, I changed the title page to the Rocketfuel font to match the cover.
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Here are suggested artwork placement for gaps.

pg 6 ferris-tosasth-tower-1050x1083.jpg
pg 43 stone-living-statue-960x1363.jpg
pg 48/49 flying-death-960x937.jpg
pg 73 germek-1050x1030.jpg
pg 88 ollie-greedy-960x609.jpg, assuming the extra space at the bottom can combine
pg 124 zombie-minotaur-1050x997.jpg should fit before or after #25 if it is scaled down a bit
pg 146 death-of-harlan-964x818.jpg
pg 155 gnoll-face-628x525.jpg

The following images are purposely short and wide, meant to add vertical space in a column. I don't have a preference for placement, but they could be dropped into a page to reduce a gap.

dagger-960x187.jpg
fury-of-zew-1050x348.jpg
great-axe-bird-bone-1050x524.jpg
shortbow-1050x201.jpg
snake-pick-1050x417.jpg
spear-960x116.jpg
strazdana-1050x146.jpg

Let's see where this gets us. It's probably going to be good enough, but I'm still game for knocking out a few more illustrations or writing more text to fill the gaps.

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Re: Terror in Tosasth

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Announcing!

LA1 Terror in Tosasth, Release 21 -- February 20, 2023
Here's the first official Downloads page release of Leon Atkinson's Terror in Tosasth, an adventure series comprised of many small adventures in a common setting.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html#la1
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So the new release has the art more or less as you've just indicated; you should take a look, obviously.

If you'd like to write a downloads page blurb, feel free to post it here and I'll copy it over.
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Solomoriah wrote: Sat Feb 18, 2023 10:37 pm I'm building an R21 right now. Anyone proofing R20, just post your corrections here as noted above.

Leon, I've integrated the four images you tagged to replace the gray boxes. If you want to fill in white spaces, feel free to post a list here for me. Also, I changed the title page to the Rocketfuel font to match the cover.
I'm working my way through R20 right now.
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Re: Terror in Tosasth

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Basically no textual difference between R20 and R21, but the page numbers might be off a bit. You don't need to post corrections, necessarily, but give me some context to search for to find the errors.
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