Ack. This is one of my personal rules, besides being in keeping with the accepted style of the day, but I'm often too lazy to go through a whole book fixing them. Thanks man.
Thanks for all of that!AlMan wrote: ↑Fri Nov 08, 2019 9:09 pmPage 3 – St. Dagon’s Cove paragraph 1
Changed “Temple by the Sea” to “Dark Temple”.
Page 4 – Long John Ahab’s Tale of woe – Boxed Text paragraph 1
Changed “Temple by the Sea” to “Dark Temple”.
Page 6 – paragraph 1
Changed “Temple by the Sea” to “Dark Temple”.
Page 6 – The Zewlac Cult – Item 7
Changed “Temple by the Sea” to “Dark Temple”.
Page 7 – Travel from St. Dagon’s Cove to … header
Changed “Temple by the Sea” to “Dark Temple”.
Page 8 – 5 Kitchen – Monster description
Capped the first C of the “Cultist cooks”
Page 9 – 8 Canein Unit: paragraph 1
Changed “1d4+1” to 1d4+2” to match the time given in room 1.
Page 36 – Wandering Monsters
Added blurb about which Basic Fantasy Field Guide the Quasit and Grimlock are from to monster descriptions.
I've put a copy of The Dark Temple R5 in the Projects folder of Dropbox.
Now, about your questions:
Yes, that's probably a good idea.
You are welcome to fix these kinds of things when they come up. Since you've handed it off, I'll probably go ahead and fix it.
Ack. Artistic license in use. I'd leave this one alone.AlMan wrote: ↑Fri Nov 08, 2019 9:14 pm Page 50 – Three Days of Peace and Music – 33 Grand Hall – 2nd paragraph after 2nd text box.
Which word is better; apprehended or comprehended?
Currently:
The swirling apparition on the far wall is the gate, and the strange thing seen within is Vheld’broggn itself, although its full form can not yet be apprehended.
Should be?
The swirling apparition on the far wall is the gate, and the strange thing seen within is Vheld’broggn itself, although its full form can not yet be comprehended.
I've been asking myself the same question. Opinions?
Yeah. I'll do that myself, probably in the next release.