ruzzzr wrote: ↑Wed Sep 25, 2019 5:45 am
Thanks! I just cleaned up a few glaringly obvious things and am reposting this as a final entry. I hope you all find it fun to read and play.
Ruzzzr,
I had to make some changes to get this into more of a BFRPG Style. Here is a list of what I did, there are other misspellings, but I realize they are in the speech patterns of the NPC's in the adventure so I left those alone.
Switched to two column format. The original SPI four column format (Yes, I played SPI DragonQuest version 1 back in the 1980s), is not what BFRPG uses.
All the room names were set to all caps. This again is a BFRPG Standard.
Changed Monster descriptions to use MonsterBlock Style and changed Hit Blocks to use the HPCheckBoxes and HPChecksEnd Styles. These are BFRPG Standards. Added non-breaking spaces where needed in the description blocks, another BFPRG Style.
Made sure that die were marked as 1d2, 1d3, 1d4, 1d6, 1d8, 1d10.
Page 1 – The Hook – Paragraph 1 and The Arrival Boxed text -
Changed ‘travelling’ to ‘traveling’.
Page 3 – Entry Chamber – Paragraph 2
Changed ‘discernable’ to ‘discernible’.
Page 4 – Spider Lair – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘undigestible’ to ‘indigestible‘.
Page 7 – Trapped Key Room – Paragraph 1
Changed 10x10 to 10’x10’.
Attached is R2 of your adventure. Good luck in the contest.