Anybody want to help me out?

[Solomoriah]

I've just thrown together a small adventure, intended for one short session, for levels 5-8 or so, and I'm interested in a little help. I'll send it to anyone (other than one of my players) who asks, but I need suggestions back before tomorrow night.

Anyone interested?

[Metroknight]

Are you wanting someone to playtest it or just look it over? I could play test in but not tonight but if you wish for someone to give a looksee then I can do it. I'm offwork tonight and tomorrow.

[Solomoriah]

I'm looking for suggestions for twists to add to the adventure. If you want a copy, I'll need your email address; you can post it here, or send me an email at solomoriah@basicfantasy.org and I'll reply with the adventure. Please let me know if you can handle OpenOffice format or if you need PDF.

[Metroknight]

I got it and I'm looking it over. I use Openoffice so either works for me. I will respond shortly in an email after studying it.

[Solomoriah]

Thanks!

Any other takers?

After it's been played, I'll post it (likely as an AA series adventure since it's quite short) and credit will be given to anyone who contributes.

[dymondy2k]

I'll take a look if you want. I might be able to play test it as well later after you polish it.

[Solomoriah]

Check your inbox...

[Hywaywolf]

send me a copy and I'll look it over for appropriate deviousness. The only trouble I will have is that I haven't made it over 4th level since 1985 so I don't have any recent knowledge of how powerful level 5-8 are.

[Joe the Rat]

Not sure how much good I can do at this point, but I'd be happy to take a peek as well.

[Metroknight]

sent you some additional feedback. just simple suggestions.