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Awesome.. let us know what you think.. if you see spelling or grammar errors let us know as well.

I only glanced over random bits of the text, mostly checking out the monsters and treasures (by the way, great treasures); I found some typos on p5, describing the treasures in Area 9:

• "contains1,700 gp" -- missing space
• "Set next to bags" -- missing definite article
• "headdress that is functions as" -- superfluous "is"

Thanx.. I've got these fixed but I'll hold up posting a new release in case we need more fixes.

Why? Go ahead and release it. "Release early, release often" is a mantra of power in the Open Source world for a reason... it's good for the project.

It's all just bits, after all.

cause I'm lazy? It was just one paragraph so I thought I would see if anymore came back.

Ah, so. Well, then, carry on!

- The Tomb, correct to "...the carelessness of Aram's men"
- 2. Main Hall, correct to "Characters that inspect..."
- 9. Ritual Chamber, Treasure, correct to "...is the bandits' ill-gotten"

Changes made and new file uploaded! Thanx for the help guys!

So its been awhile since I last checked this thread out and I am wondering if anyone ever actually ended up using this adventure? Anyone have any words on how it can be improved?

I am also thinking of making some changes myself but I want to hear some feedback first.

My group is just a bit too high for it..