AA1 Adventure Anthology One

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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jun 09, 2014 8:14 am

Gold in the Hills, 4. The Mine, Bottom of Page 4, correct to "with two legs and two arms"

Merilla's Magic Tower, New Magic Items, Bottom of Page 9, change to "re-rolling"?

Taming the Flames, 1. Study, bottom of page 55, change to "If the characters don't know the real story", or replace "et" with "yet"?

Taming the Flames, 2. Common Room, correct "accidently" to "accidentally"
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jun 09, 2014 10:34 pm

Thanks! I've swept up those changes. You're already credited in the module, right? ... never can remember anyone's real name. :(
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Post Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:58 am

I am indeed :)
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jul 21, 2014 6:18 am

Okay, I just uploaded what I hope is the final print version of the module. Take a look and let me know what you all think. Thanks!
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:49 am

Image

It's almost here! I will do another editing pass just to make sure I didn't miss anything.
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jul 21, 2014 3:11 pm

I'm excited!! Not just for the two modules I submitted but for all the others I got the chance to playtest!
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:01 pm

It's looking really good. The only critique I have is that I think the adventures should be listed in ascending order based on level rating (ie all the adventures for beginning characters first, then 1st level, 2nd level, etc.) rather than all mixed up. That way they would be arranged roughly in order of how they might be run and/or it would be easier to find a specific level rated adventure (ie easier/lower level adventures at the beginning, harder/higher level adventures at the end).

I love having them all collected in a single document though. Great work.
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:30 pm

Ack. At this point, I don't think I'm going to rearrange it. It's not that hard to use as is, and consistency is a hobgoblin as we all know...
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Wed Jul 30, 2014 10:32 am

... so nobody, me included, noticed that the page headings in the Introduction said "Gold in the Hills." Crap. I'm uploading R9 now, to the site and to CreateSpace. This will delay the print release, of course, and I'll have to order a second proof.

PLEASE, guys, LOOK OVER THE PDF. If there's anything wrong with it (text obscured by pictures, weird page breaks, page numbers not agreeing with the contents), LET ME KNOW. I need eyes on this.
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One

Post Wed Jul 30, 2014 11:01 am

Taking a look at it now.

Is the image on the first page missing for an intended reason?
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