DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

[dymondy2k]

Now that I know I do! I do it when writing emails at work all the time but luckily Outlook is good at catching it..

[chiisu81]

I've emailed the cleaned up pic to you Solo.

Do you still have this for R5?

I'd still like to get the images/maps to work on.

[jdn2006]

Another double word:

"down down" on Page 21.

In:
After sitting down down, Fonkin stands up to address the party.

[Solomoriah]

Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.

[dymondy2k]

Lemme look at that... It should read after the party sits down or after the party has a seat.

[chiisu81]

Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.

It's not needed, as earlier it's already stating they're sitting down. Simply revise to "Fonkin stands up to address the party".

I couldn't find the other duplicated words JD referenced, maybe I'm just blind. Otherwise made all corrections along with cleaning up and scaling to 300DPI the title page image.

[Solomoriah]

I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.

[Solomoriah]

By the way... DC1 is smaller than I usually prefer to print, but I think it's big enough and good enough to be worth it. Once we beat any remaining issues out of it, I'd like to see about doing just that.

[chiisu81]

Even if it costs more than paperback, perhaps at least saddle-stitch?

[chiisu81]

I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.

Have done so. I found the other duplicate words and have corrected a few other spots as I re-read; I'll send R6 soon.