DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sun Sep 21, 2014 3:18 pm

Now that I know I do! I do it when writing emails at work all the time but luckily Outlook is good at catching it..
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Fri Nov 14, 2014 2:19 pm

chiisu81 wrote:I've emailed the cleaned up pic to you Solo.
Do you still have this for R5?

I'd still like to get the images/maps to work on.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 22, 2014 11:18 am

Another double word:

"down down" on Page 21.

In:
After sitting down down, Fonkin stands up to address the party.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 22, 2014 7:58 pm

Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:13 am

Lemme look at that... It should read after the party sits down or after the party has a seat.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 5:33 pm

Solomoriah wrote:Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.
It's not needed, as earlier it's already stating they're sitting down. Simply revise to "Fonkin stands up to address the party".

I couldn't find the other duplicated words JD referenced, maybe I'm just blind. :( Otherwise made all corrections along with cleaning up and scaling to 300DPI the title page image.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:57 pm

I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:59 pm

By the way... DC1 is smaller than I usually prefer to print, but I think it's big enough and good enough to be worth it. Once we beat any remaining issues out of it, I'd like to see about doing just that.
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:10 pm

Even if it costs more than paperback, perhaps at least saddle-stitch?
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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Post Sun Nov 30, 2014 9:26 am

Solomoriah wrote:I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.
Have done so. I found the other duplicate words and have corrected a few other spots as I re-read; I'll send R6 soon.
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