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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 8:47 am
by Solomoriah
Also, I just pushed R10 to the downloads page. Give it a once-over, if you would. Thanks!
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 9:23 am
by chiisu81
Page 7: 18. Watchdogs - needs a colon after (to maintain consistency with room names/headers)
Page 16-17: 9b. through 13. - Same
Page 22: 2. Musty Bedroom - Same
Page 24: 6. through 10. - Same
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 9:42 am
by Solomoriah
And now I'm pushing R11 to the downloads page...
The "SURPRISE!" room didn't get a colon; I consider this a valid deviation. The others are all fixed, and I also fixed a bunch of commas with a space in front of them (all in stat strings for monsters).
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 1:02 pm
by dymondy2k
Sorry I missed this.. Looks good to me in black!
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 6:52 pm
by Solomoriah
Great, thanks! Now, if Chi will give the R11 PDF his blessing, I'll get this uploaded to Lulu and CreateSpace!
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 9:44 pm
by chiisu81
Intro: change to "... three-part adventure series..."
Page 26, #9: room header needs a colon
Otherwise looks good!
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:25 am
by Solomoriah
... so now, R12.
I changed the flow a bit, so eye it closely please.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:22 am
by chiisu81
Looks good to me
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 5:58 pm
by Solomoriah
Excellent! I'll try to get this out in print tonight, or perhaps tomorrow night.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:46 pm
by Solomoriah
Okay, it's done! DC1 is now updated to the new, dark-covered 2nd Edition R12 on Lulu.com, and will be available on CreateSpace.com and Amazon.com tomorrow.