SG1 Saga of the Giants - Hill Giant Hall

[jdn2006]

Bryce Lynch posted a review of this product on his site.

That was a handy review, especially the constructive criticism.

I'm downloading the files to look them over as a result and make a few changes.

E-mailed update.

[Karnos]

From the title page, "For 9 to 12 Player Characters, Levels 9 to 12"

I assume this must be a typo. I don't think that many gaming groups have 9 or more players.

Some (not all) of the other "giants" adventures have the same typo.

[jdn2006]

I'm downloading this for editing.

[jdn2006]

SG1-Saga-of-the-Giants-Hill-Giant-Hall-r11

I'm downloading this for error corrections (I'll try to get it back by Monday). Notably…


HP Box errors: 4
Monster Count versus HP sets errors: 1

page 6
10. PRIVATE ROOM OF THE CHIEF & CHIEFTESS.
No period after "potted plants is a leather purse with 300 pp and 150 gp"

Page 9
20. OPEN ROOFED RUNNING AREA.
11 Dire Wolves (needs a colon after)


Page 11
expanded data for wandering monsters (above room 1. LANDING.)
1d3 Tentacle Worms: first one has 20 hp but 17 boxes


Page 11
room # 3. PRISON.
2 Flesh Golems*: second one has 36 hp and 31 boxes.

Page 13
Room # 11. SECRET TEMPLE.
3 Hill Giant Mummies*: (1st one has 64 hp and 60 boxes)
6 Ogre Zombies: (3rd one has 24 hp and 25 boxes)

Page 16:
17. GUARD ROOM.
s/b 4 bugbears not 5

[jdn2006]

While I'm waiting for the last version e-mailed to be posted...

12. SECRET TEMPLE.
three healing potions <-- "three" should not be bold.

AC 15 (13) <- "(13)" not needed
AC 15 (12) <- "(12)" not needed
Mv 30' Unarmored 40' <- " Unarmored 40'" not needed

The the mummy with with 64 hp = The mummy with 64 hp

NEW MAGIC ITEMS

Spear of Lightning +1, +2 or +3. needs to be moved after after the sling bullets.

Amulet of Protection From Evil. Bestows the effect of the Protection From Evil spell on the wearer [needs period]

[Solomoriah]

Uploading it now. I made a few minor corrections, so please download the new version before making further updates. Thanks!