The Hunt For Rary's Deep

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Nycto
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The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Sun Aug 29, 2021 1:23 pm

Hey guys, this is an adventure I've been typing on for the past couple months and I thought I'd send it in!
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Mon Aug 30, 2021 9:39 am

Looks interesting! You haven't included the required OGL text... are you okay with us doing so? One of us on the production team would be happy to put this into the standard format for you, but we do need to know about the rights.

BTW Chi: I've already popped out the maps and dropped them into the Projects folder.
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:10 am

Thanks Solo 8-)
If Nycto approves, I can work on putting into our standard formatting.
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Tue Aug 31, 2021 11:16 am

Yes, go ahead and add the OGL text, sorry I forgot!
I approve the standard formatting completely!

Thank you guys for taking a look. Can't wait to see what you do with it!
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Tue Aug 31, 2021 1:03 pm

Thanks! 8-) I will begin working on this
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Wed Sep 01, 2021 2:36 pm

Ok here is r1 (keeping the original docs in the first post for now).
The monster blocks are incomplete, and there's several comments that need to be addressed.
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Nycto
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Thu Sep 02, 2021 9:47 pm

This looks incredible!
Sorry, I'm pretty new to this, so this question might seems silly.
What can I do to complete the monster blocks if they're incomplete?

Also, should I post an introduction for the module here on the forum to add, and where can I find the comments to address?
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Fri Sep 03, 2021 7:37 am

Hi Nycto,

I can complete the blocks for r2; if you check other adventures you'll see the required stats in the blocks, then can pull from the Core Rules, FG1, etc. as needed for each entry.

Yes, you can post your introduction in this forum thread for any feedback and corrections, and then we can integrate it into the next release.

If you haven't already, please download LibreOffice; it's what we use to edit the odt documents. In that program, once you open the odt in my previous post you'll see the right-side comment section, along with the highlighted text where each comment is "tied into". I'll also PM you a link to the fonts we use for our documents, so that it will appear the same on your system.
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Fri Sep 03, 2021 5:19 pm

Okay, Chii, here's what I've done with it. I hope I've addressed everything I was supposed to.

The region map corresponding to the encounter table is here too. Sorry for the confusion.
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Re: The Hunt For Rary's Deep

Post Sun Sep 05, 2021 8:39 am

Okay Nycto, excellent! Two issues we do need to deal with:

First, the image for the map is rather tiny. At the printing reproduction rate of 300 dpi, it will be under 2 inches wide on the page. What software did you use to make it? It's rather a nice map despite the small size.

Second, and not terribly important right now, when you post an updated manuscript you should update the release number. So your filename ends "-r1 (2).odt" where it should end "-r2.odt" now. But don't worry about that for the moment, I'm already fixing it.

Chi: I'm saving this to the Projects folder with very minor updates for your review, since I know you're not "in" on the weekends.
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