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Rosisha wrote: ↑Tue Dec 08, 2020 6:01 pm Quick edit comments:
- third paragraph under history - "Intelligen" needs the T
- Why the death save benefit?

Thanks for catching that typo. Also, the Death Save is to reflect the "Nine Lives" aspect while keeping things mechanically simple and not too different from the standard race entries. DM's may wish to implement a different advantage against dying, which is one of the beautiful things about the old school.

Oh that's right! I read that discussion too.

Minor revisions and art included. Do you think this one is ready for the showcase?

Let me know about any final corrections you see.

If its completed and you have Showcase access put it there if you want, but R3 seems to have an odd format...

Dimirag wrote: ↑Fri Dec 11, 2020 2:47 pm If its completed and you have Showcase access put it there if you want, but R3 seems to have an odd format...

If it was the spacing in the .odt file, I think I fixed it. I cleaned up the image in the PDF too when I resaved it. If I missed something else, please let me know.

I'm using the Gnome Supplement from the Download page for comparison
-It seems your files has a finer margin (1,27cm vs 1,91cm roughly 0.5 inches vs 0.75 inches)
-You are using a "double enter" for spacing between paragraphs instead of the automated space of .25cm (nearly 0.1 inches).
-Seems you are using Soutane for the whole file, you need other fonts for the headline and titles (SoutaneBlack and FrizQuadrata BT)
-Your font size should be at 10/10.5 points instead of 11 (11 is OK for "headliners" don't know the actual names)

I took the liberty of trying to give proper format, I bump it to R3.5 (the file was still as R1)

I have to cut down a part of your picture, but surely you can use the original one if you find a better place to put it on the file

The Sample Characters needs to be formatted but LibreOffice is giving me hell when trying to change the spacing between lines inside complete tables.

Was the document created using either the template or an existing doc? Most of those issues shouldn't have been present if so...
I'm not keen on the formatting for the pre-generated NPCs. I guess I'd first ask, are they needed? And why 3rd-level?

chiisu81 wrote: ↑Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:17 am Was the document created using either the template or an existing doc? Most of those issues shouldn't have been present if so...
I'm not keen on the formatting for the pre-generated NPCs. I guess I'd first ask, are they needed? And why 3rd-level?

Chii, I used a previous document I wrote as the template. I'm not sure what the formatting issues are as I don't see them on my end.

I put the pregens in there since hoping folks might be able to use them. (I start campaigns at 3rd level, just my preference). However, they do not need to be there and feel free to remove them if you think that's better.

If you want me to make these or any changes, just DM me and I'll do it within a few days. When it comes to formatting, I defer to the experts. If you want to edit/tweak the documents, that's fine too.

Teaman, it's your document. It probably won't be on the Downloads page, so don't worry about whether everything included is "standard." That said, never turn down formatting help from Chi...