New Class: Kennel Master

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Rosisha
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:21 am

That's why he was hunting!
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Wed Sep 30, 2020 2:42 pm

Added three new skills:

Pack Leader: The Kennel Master trains one dog to be the pack leader. This dog while not being ordered to do anything else can coordinate and attack with other dogs giving each a +1 to hit. Only one dog can be pack leader at a time.

Teamwork: When more than one dog is under the care of a Kennel Master, they can be trained as a team to pull sleds or wagons. The weight of the wagon, when divided across all dogs, cannot exceed 50% of their light encumbrance.

Herding: The dog is trained to growl, bark, howl, and stalk a single target. This is similar to a clerical turning, and use the turning undead table (pg 50 | 54 pdf) for target rolls based on the dog’s hit dice. If successful the target will flee away from the dog. This is always successful on sheep.
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 10:11 am

Okay here is the final version R4 with all changes made. Is this acceptable for potential deployment to the showcase?
BF Class Supplement - Kennel Master - R4.pdf
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 2:46 pm

Materials go in the Showcase if the author puts them there. Solomoriah is the one whom decides if a member gets access to the Showcase.

It seems the file still needs formatting:
-Its lacking the corresponding fonts.
-There are a couple of "empty spaces" between some parragraphs.
-The images needs to be credited (and I'm not sure about having colored images).
-The credit page mentions "fighter subclasses" and "quasi classes" (this may be intended)

It says that the class is limited to 4 dogs based on his level, but he is limited to a max of 10HD. I guess the max amount is based on 4 and his charisma and not his level, surplus HD must be used on existing dogs. This means that a 0 charisma bonus character will loose 2HD if he does not encounter and acquire dogs with more than 1HD.

The part about giving and recovering HD to a from dogs seems weird to me the way its expressed.
Sorry for any misspelling or writing error, I am not a native English speaker
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 3:44 pm

Will work on fixing! I'm not sure if you saw comments, but the first is a painting from 1570 called "Boy with a Grayhound" the second is of unknown origin, "A Hunter and Dogs Pursuing a Hare", from about 1430–40, Unknown illuminator. I can remove them of course.

I'm showing the fonts as soutane - isn't that what we are supposed to use? Is there a font I'm missing?
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 3:52 pm

Rosisha wrote:
Thu Oct 01, 2020 3:44 pm
I'm not sure if you saw comments, but the first is a painting from 1570 called "Boy with a Grayhound" the second is of unknown origin, "A Hunter and Dogs Pursuing a Hare", from about 1430–40, Unknown illuminator. I can remove them of course.
Both needs to be credited on the file rather than on a comment.
I'm showing the fonts as soutane - isn't that what we are supposed to use? Is there a font I'm missing?
The pdf does not show them as they should.
Sorry for any misspelling or writing error, I am not a native English speaker
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 3:54 pm

Ah gotcha. I've removed them for now. I was actually thinking of drawing my own.
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 3:56 pm

Oh and working on the font issue.
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 6:32 pm

I think I've fixed the primary issues!
BF Class Supplement - Kennel Master - R5.odt
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Re: New Class: Kennel Master

Post Thu Oct 01, 2020 8:12 pm

On the credit page, at the bottom: "Basic Fantasy Role-Playing Game Copyright © 2006-2016 Chris Gonnerman. Fighter Subclasses:"
Remove the "Fighter Sublcasses" and I think you are done.
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