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[AA4] Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2020 12:17 am
by Solomoriah
Here's the small adventure I used back when I started my current campaign. I've been putting off sharing this until it's "done" but it's time to stop procrastinating. Enjoy!
Edit: this will appear in the eventual AA4
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:09 pm
by AlMan
Page 4 – 5. Tunnel – Paragraph 1
Was:
… the back wall is bare dirt with has a narrow tunnel dug into it.
Changed to:
… the back wall is bare dirt which has a narrow tunnel dug into it.
Page 6 – 11a. Tower Ground Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 2
Was:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed greatsword.
Changed to:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed great sword.
Added my name as Proofreader to Page 1.
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:10 pm
by AlMan
Question about Shadows of the Undercity:
Page 7 – 11b. Tower Upper Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 1
Text says eight windows, map shows only four.
Currently:
There are no doors, but there are eight tall, narrow windows spaced evenly around the room.
Should be:
There are no doors, but there are four tall, narrow windows spaced evenly around the room.
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2020 11:40 pm
by Solomoriah
Okay, I have this deja vu sensation... have I released this adventure before and forgotten it?
Gah. I'll have to do some looking. That whole 8 vs. 4 windows thing sounds familiar...
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2020 8:29 am
by chiisu81
Doesn't ring a bell with me...
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2020 4:57 pm
by Solomoriah
Well, the map is correct, anyway.
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2020 9:27 am
by chiisu81
Possible for inclusion in AA3?
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:13 pm
by Solomoriah
I hope so.
However, let's not sweep it in just yet. There's a lot of empty boxed text in there.
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:23 pm
by Solomoriah
Just uploaded R4 with Al's changes as well as a correction to the number of windows and a very small amount of new boxed text.
Re: Shadows of the Undercity
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2020 8:18 pm
by Seven
AlMan wrote: ↑Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:09 pm
Page 6 – 11a. Tower Ground Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 2
Was:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed greatsword.
Changed to:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed great sword.
Added my name as Proofreader to Page 1.
I suppose there are no consensus on this, but as we use longsword and shortsword, I personally much prefer greatsword. It does contrast with axes where we use hand axe, battle axe and great axe.