[AA3] The Grave of Gareth

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MinkyBoodle
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[AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Sun Dec 08, 2019 6:26 am

Hey everybody. I tried working up a little dungeon crawl for 2-4 characters level 1-3. I know my formatting is all kinds of wonky (sorry), but I do hope to improve upon this as much as possible. I am open to all suggestions and edits to help improve my adventures, especially this one. If you feel the monster balance is off, treasure is too much/too little, or even just want to tell me where it's lacking any fun, please feel free to let me know. I consider it all part of the editing process. Thanks.

EDIT: Most recent revision attached.
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Re: The Grave of Gareth adventure

Post Sun Dec 08, 2019 11:55 pm

Nice little adventure. Here are the edits I made:

Page 1 – Introduction – Paragraph 6
Changed ‘one’ to ‘once’.

Page 4 – 7 Conference Room Alpha – Treasure description
Changed missle to missile.

Page 4 – 11 Long Hallway – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘opotune’ with ‘opportune’.

Page 4 – 12 Makeshift Bedroom
Changed ‘alone on will’ to ‘alone one will’.

Page 5 – 14 Daycare – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘has be herded’ to ‘has been herded’.

Page 5 – 16 Shrine of the Harp – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘This believe,’ to ‘This belief,’.

Page 7 – Concluding the Adventure – Paragraph 2
Changed ‘If they characters’ to ‘If the characters’

Page 9 – Maps – Header
Changed ‘BF6 Castle D’Angelo’ to ‘The Grave of Garath’

Page 10 – OGL – last paragraph
Changed ‘My Adventure’ to ‘The Grave of Garath’

I'm also including the r2 of the module. Look it over to make sure it still says what you want it to.
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Re: The Grave of Gareth adventure

Post Wed Dec 11, 2019 12:27 am

AlMan wrote:
Sun Dec 08, 2019 11:55 pm
Nice little adventure. Here are the edits I made:

Page 1 – Introduction – Paragraph 6
Changed ‘one’ to ‘once’.

Page 4 – 7 Conference Room Alpha – Treasure description
Changed missle to missile.

Page 4 – 11 Long Hallway – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘opotune’ with ‘opportune’.

Page 4 – 12 Makeshift Bedroom
Changed ‘alone on will’ to ‘alone one will’.

Page 5 – 14 Daycare – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘has be herded’ to ‘has been herded’.

Page 5 – 16 Shrine of the Harp – Paragraph 1
Changed ‘This believe,’ to ‘This belief,’.

Page 7 – Concluding the Adventure – Paragraph 2
Changed ‘If they characters’ to ‘If the characters’

Page 9 – Maps – Header
Changed ‘BF6 Castle D’Angelo’ to ‘The Grave of Garath’

Page 10 – OGL – last paragraph
Changed ‘My Adventure’ to ‘The Grave of Garath’

I'm also including the r2 of the module. Look it over to make sure it still says what you want it to.
Thanks, Al! I knew I could count on you to catch my goofs. I'll look it over, but I'm fairly certain you didn't change any intended meaning.
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Re: The Grave of Gareth adventure

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 3:49 pm

Not bad, not too bad 8-) Corrected a few things, set most monster stat-blocks as the correct style, and re-inserted map image as it appeared stretched. Could be a contender for AA3...
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MinkyBoodle
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Re: The Grave of Gareth adventure

Post Fri Dec 13, 2019 12:29 am

chiisu81 wrote:
Thu Dec 12, 2019 3:49 pm
Not bad, not too bad 8-) Corrected a few things, set most monster stat-blocks as the correct style, and re-inserted map image as it appeared stretched. Could be a contender for AA3...
Hey, thanks chii! I'll definitely agree to AA3 if it turns out to be worthy enough. Lots of good adventures floating throughout here already.

EDIT:
I've looked through all the editing work thusfar and I can't thank all of you enough. I reworded a few things I didn't like how I put them before. Now here's R4 for everybody.
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Re: [AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Thu Dec 19, 2019 9:06 am

For consistency, you probably should edit your first post and change out the download there. We try to keep the current version of a document in the first post during the pre-release stage, so you don't have to search the thread to find it.
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Re: [AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Thu Dec 19, 2019 11:58 pm

Solomoriah wrote:
Thu Dec 19, 2019 9:06 am
For consistency, you probably should edit your first post and change out the download there. We try to keep the current version of a document in the first post during the pre-release stage, so you don't have to search the thread to find it.
Thanks, Solo! Got it switched out.
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Re: [AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Wed Jan 22, 2020 10:35 am

r4 uploaded to first post.
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Re: [AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Tue Jan 28, 2020 5:27 am

I was very much feel "in the zone" so I drew maps for this adventure as well.
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The full XCF files are in the AA3 project folder.

Let me know if there are details that should be corrected or adjusted.
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Re: [AA3] The Grave of Gareth

Post Wed Jan 29, 2020 12:35 am

borgar wrote:
Tue Jan 28, 2020 5:27 am
I was very much feel "in the zone" so I drew maps for this adventure as well.

upper_level.png

lower_level.png

The full XCF files are in the AA3 project folder.

Let me know if there are details that should be corrected or adjusted.
Seeing this is one of the coolest gaming moments ever for me. borgar, you are incredible and these looks amazing. Thank you.
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