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By now, I'm almost finished with this adventure.
I have the last chapter and the great showdown left.

I am pretty satisfied with how this turned out, seeing that is my first real adventure that I've written.
I was a bit afraid that this was too much "railroad" so I've added a few side quests so the GM can spice things up a little.

The document (Version 3.5) is uploaded in my original post.
And as always, please please give me some feedback on this. When you get your head stuck in something like this it's easy to loose track.
Thank you.

I have taken a very brief look at this, and it looks good. I have seen some spelling mistakes and punctuation mistakes. I don't want to step on anyones toes here so I will ask before pour some time into this, does anyone mind if I took a read of this and submitted my edit somewhere?

Thank's StoveMaster, I don't know if AlMan wants to continue to edit this document, but I assume so.
Glad you liked it (apart from the spelling )

Post your edits here, to start with. If you become a regular proofer, we'll get you connected with us via Dropbox.

If it's just a few edits, can post them here in the thread, citing page #, etc.
If it's more, attach an edited/updated ODT (I prefer you to enable Track Changes, others don't like/need it).

Ok thanks, I will take a look at it properly over the weekend.

Ok, so I've finished the adventure.
I'll upload it to my original post as R 4.0.

Hope you like it, I had a lot of fun writing it.
I really hope it make it into AA3.

Here's r5.
Edit: moved to first post

Wow, thanks chiisu81.
The formatting looks awesome!

Happy to help I didn't do a full read-through, just corrected things that stood out. Will let others do additional editing (and if you have any additional edits/additions/etc/) and then later on I'll sit down for a full edit.