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I am still here! (Though life and work have made it very difficult to keep up!)

Thank you all for taking a look through the adventure/module. I'll look through the comments, get caught back up, and reply through.

Thanks!

AlMan wrote: ↑Thu Feb 20, 2020 1:09 am I also had a few things that I didn't fix, but may need an answer for:
Page 3 – Entrance and Main Corridor – Paragraph 2
Awkward language.
Currently:
While the complex is located in the rock of the cavern floors, the crypt itself is constructed from smoothly cut stone.
Suggest:
While the rest of the cavern is rough, the walls and floor of the crypt itself is constructed from smoothly cut stone.

I agree, it could have been worded better. I like this one from Chiisu81: "While the rest of the cavern is rough, the crypt itself is constructed from smoothly-cut stone."

It keeps it simple enough.

AlMan wrote: ↑Thu Feb 20, 2020 1:09 am What is meant by ‘very high’, ‘high’, or ‘moderate’ ability checks used throughout this module? Percentage roll, ‘y in dx’ or another type of roll?

My intent was to leave this up to the GM; however, it probably should be better explained. Depending on the task, it left some leeway to the GM to assign a check value (like moderate being around a 10-ish on a d20 check, high being a 15-ish, and very high being 17 or 18-ish).

Should this be added in the "Notes ..." section for the GM?

Quick r7 update:

*Page 3: Added notes to the 'Notes for the Game Master' section explaining check difficulties
*Page 3: Changed the awkwardly cut stone to the second of Chiisu's recommendations. Now cavern is to rough as crypt is to smooth.
*Page 6: Removed "grinning" from the end of Room 6 description (he was grinning 2x)

Fonts might be a bit wonky (not sure) with this upload, since my previous laptop's monitor burned out (and I did not get the fonts retrieved from it).

Thanks! re-uploaded r7 with a few layout/table tweaks.
PM'ed you link for the fonts.

Gonna go ahead and lock this thread, as I'm starting to put AA3 together, starting with this adventure. The AA3 thread will be updated and unlocked once I've finished the initial work.