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These are more "cosmetic" than vital.

Repeated use of "Attacks:" rather than "#At" in monster stat lines

Page 8
3. EAST ROOM:
should be: "3 Giant Rats:"

Page 9:
7. WARRIOR TRAINING ROOM:
s/b "3 Regular Kobolds:"

s/b "2 Kobold Guards:"

8. PANTRY:
s/b "5 Goblins:"

11. ANTEROOM:
s/b "2 Living Crystal Statues:"

page 11:
17. BUTCHER:
s/b "8 Giant Rats:"

page 15
30. GREAT HALL:
s/b "3 Orcs:"

I'll try to get this taken care of this weekend.

(Words used right after each other, best looked up with the search function): "The the" as in "The the fluid in the trough ..."

In R16 a check didn't bring up any such errors; can you give specific locations?

Page 1, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Page 7, 9-11 1d6 Giant Rates: extra space before closing parenthesis
Page 15, bottom left paragraph: extra space (with the urgoblin)
Page 16, Urgoblin: extra space (#At 1)
Page 22, 50. Sanctuary, first paragraph (non-boxed): extra space (water clock at the west)
Page 26, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Page 35, 1st paragraph: extra space (one of his platinum)
Page 44, 14. Count Down Trap, 1st paragraph: extra space (It is covered)

Still couldn't locate duplicate words (I'd have to do a full read-through); JD can you let us know the specific ones?

chiisu81 wrote:Page 1, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence

Fixed. It was intentional, but justification makes it too big.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 7, 9-11 1d6 Giant Rates: extra space before closing parenthesis

Giant Rates? Like what I get from my credit card company?

Fixed.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 15, bottom left paragraph: extra space (with the urgoblin)

Dang you have good eyes.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 16, Urgoblin: extra space (#At 1)

Again, dang good eyes.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 22, 50. Sanctuary, first paragraph (non-boxed): extra space (water clock at the west)

Fixed.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 26, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence

Intentional, left as is.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 35, 1st paragraph: extra space (one of his platinum)

Fixed.

chiisu81 wrote:Page 44, 14. Count Down Trap, 1st paragraph: extra space (It is covered)

Fixed.

I'll push a new version to the server tomorrow (or rather, later today).

So close to being finished!

Um... I think you're on the wrong one. BF2 is in print. Are you thinking of Strongholds of Sorcery?

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Drat. Yes...

R18 released by Solo. Notes: "This release fixes a couple of very minor layout issues. It's still not a print release... I'm hoping to drum up some art to fill in some of the blank space, and maybe even show some of the NPCs."