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Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 9:35 am
by chiisu81
I hadn't noticed the different font sizes before, anyone else catch that?
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:58 am
by chiisu81
Page 4, Religion in the Western Lands, The Hundred Gods: correct "worshipped" to "worshiped"
Page 8, top left paragraph: correct "homebase" to "home base"
Page 15, Rumors: change "reroll" to "re-roll"
Page 28, 2nd boxed text: correct "redly" to "red"
Page 29, 1st sentence: change "relock" to "locks" (also on right column, 3rd paragraph down)
Page 42, Room 42: correct "recloses" to "closes"
Page 50, Room 83, boxed text: correct "terra cotta" to "terracotta"
Page 51, bottom right paragraph: change "relock" to "locks"
Page 63, 4th paragraph: revise or remove "un-trapped"
Page 71, Additional Items: correct "beltpouches" to "belt pouches"
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 8:44 am
by Solomoriah
chiisu81 wrote:I hadn't noticed the different font sizes before, anyone else catch that?
Where?
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 10:24 am
by Solomoriah
chiisu81 wrote:Page 4, Religion in the Western Lands, The Hundred Gods: correct "worshipped" to "worshiped"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 8, top left paragraph: correct "homebase" to "home base"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 15, Rumors: change "reroll" to "re-roll"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 28, 2nd boxed text: correct "redly" to "red"
Rewrote a bit.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 29, 1st sentence: change "relock" to "locks" (also on right column, 3rd paragraph down)
Changed to "re-locks."
chiisu81 wrote:Page 42, Room 42: correct "recloses" to "closes"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 50, Room 83, boxed text: correct "terra cotta" to "terracotta"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 51, bottom right paragraph: change "relock" to "locks"
Changed to "re-locks."
chiisu81 wrote:Page 63, 4th paragraph: revise or remove "un-trapped"
Rewrote this a bunch.
chiisu81 wrote:Page 71, Additional Items: correct "beltpouches" to "belt pouches"
Beltpouch is one word in my world.
All of the above are applied for R24.
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2014 4:40 pm
by chiisu81
Solomoriah wrote:chiisu81 wrote:I hadn't noticed the different font sizes before, anyone else catch that?
Where?
I don't see anything now; likely an old version of LibreOffice and/or a font issue on whatever my system setup at that time was.

Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2014 12:37 pm
by jdn2006
F1-Morgansfort-r23 downloaded 9/7/2014.
Hit point check box errors.
errors: 9
Page 24 (part of "14. KOBOLD LAIR:")
11 Female Kobolds: [very last 1 has 1 HP and 2 boxes]
1 ?? <- 1 hp, 2 boxes
Page 35, describing "The Goblins":
1 Goblin Captain (3 total): [all three have 7 hit points but 6 boxes.]
Page 36, 4. OCTAGONAL HALL:
3 Stirges: [last one has 3 hp and 5 boxes]
page 44, 46. OLD CHAPEL:
16 Zombies: [2nd one from top has 7 hp and 8 boxes]
page 47, 62. GIANT FLY LAIR:
(Note: if you use the search function to find them, there are two sets of "7 Giant Flies" and this is the second set.)
7 Giant Flies: [top row, 2nd entry, has 7 hp and 8 boxes]
Page 52, 85. GARGOYLE:
Gargoyle: [has 18 hp and 20 boxes]
page 54, 88. LIBRARY:
Yellow Mold: [seems to be missing a second row of 8 boxes]
HP 28 ????? ????? ????? ????? <- 28 hp, 20 boxes
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:39 pm
by Solomoriah
Fixed for R24. The flow of this one has changed a bunch, it seems... it may take me a while to get it printable again.
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 10:08 am
by jdn2006
BF1-Morgansfort-r23
Page 31, Level 2
1. 1d4 Giant Draco Lizard (4 total) s/b "Lizards"
Page 32, Level 3
2. 1d2 Giant Tarantula (3 total) s/b "Tarantulas"
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 10:27 am
by jdn2006
chiisu81 wrote:Solomoriah wrote:chiisu81 wrote:I hadn't noticed the different font sizes before, anyone else catch that?
Where?
I don't see anything now; likely an old version of LibreOffice and/or a font issue on whatever my system setup at that time was.

I've seen oddities like that before and if they don't go away I use the "Clear direct formatting" option on the section. The format display can be wonky.
Re: BF1 Morgansfort
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 9:20 pm
by Solomoriah
I'm hoping to do a new print release, but I'm having flow issues... about half a page at the end of Nameless Dungeon is blank. I've added the giant bee pic that Shonuff did, which helps some, but I still need about two similarly-sized images for the 3rd level key to make it all work out.
Gah. I'll think about it later. Too tired now.