CS2 The Pit

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Re: CS2 The Pit

Post Sat Mar 24, 2018 8:57 pm

I've been AWOL for quite awhile but did appreciate the critiques I got on my entry and have been working on improvements. I've made some changes, improvements, etc. and was wondering if I could submit the new and improved replacement.

I would still appreciate any suggestions, comments, critiques as to how I could make it even better. One thing that's been bugging me is that the Armory Room (12) doesn't make sense being situated in the middle of the map. I'm thinking of swapping that room with the Prison Room (2). Does that make more sense?

Here's the new version.
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Re: CS2 The Pit

Post Sun Mar 25, 2018 9:33 am

Page 20/21, there's two entries for "10" for a 1d12 roll for wandering monsters, it looks like.
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Re: CS2 The Pit

Post Mon Mar 26, 2018 9:11 am

Blazeguard: I'll check out your corrections and apply them for r8. I don't know if swapping those rooms would really make a big difference or not. Unless others weigh in for changing them I'll keep them as-is.

Orobouros: I'll correct that for r8.
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Re: CS2 The Pit

Post Thu Mar 29, 2018 4:17 pm

Blazeguard: I'm working through your recent changes, but I'm gonna paste in my reply I made on the CS1 thread, as much of it applies to your edits as well:
Quozl: I have integrated the textual changes you posted in r15 that I've put back in the Projects folder for Solo. Note that I did not make the changes from your file relating to either magical items (which should be capitalized and bold) nor NPC/Human stat-blocks (title included before the colon, Save stat removed as it's indicated by the level at the beginning), among some other things (how treasure is written out, as well as monster names). These are things covered in the Style Guide, which has been recently updated. I also left the listed spells for Severin, as Solo requested it.
For your document, I have to ignore all your edits to the stat-blocks; you've deleted all of the non-breaking spaces Solo had put in, and you also deleted the XP values which are now standard. You've also deleted all of the boxed text?!

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Re: CS2 The Pit

Post Thu Mar 29, 2018 4:29 pm

r8 uploaded. File attachment is acting up, so there may be double attachments for awhile.
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