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Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2016 12:52 am
by Solomoriah
I uploaded the new release in the first post of this thread, but then I realized... this is a complete multimodule that is on the print track. It belongs on the Downloads page. So, it's there!

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 10:39 am
by AlMan
I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:

Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers

List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.

Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"


Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 10:44 am
by Solomoriah
Thanks, AlMan! I'll get these changes take care of in the next release.

Please PM me your name as you'd like it to appear in the credits (as you are now an official member of the proofing team...)

See, that's how this project works. You want to be a proofer? Proofread something, and voila, you're in! You want to be an author or contributor? Just do it, and Bob is your proverbial uncle.

So welcome to the team!

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 9:43 am
by chiisu81
Along with AlMan I need a proofing/editing credit. :cry: :)

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 9:47 am
by Solomoriah
I'm a bad, bad man...

:D

I'll see to it. Sorry for the oversight.

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 9:58 am
by chiisu81
I assumed you had a later revision on your computer with AlMan's edits anyways. :) Was gonna make another proofing pass soon so we can get this thing to print.

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:42 am
by Solomoriah
AlMan wrote:I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:

Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers

List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.
Corrected now. I added one with 2 HP.
AlMan wrote:Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"
Fixed. I rewrote some of that description; the saving throw reference wasn't in standard form, and there was no explanation of what "grogginess" meant in game terms. Finally, I switched from "stat line" to "stat block" format to make the entry more standard.
AlMan wrote:Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
Fixed.

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:46 am
by Solomoriah
I also removed a reference to "gathering spell components" as that's not a feature of BFRPG.

I'll get a new release uploaded soon.

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:59 am
by Solomoriah
Ack. Reread the "spell components" thing and understood what the author actually meant; revised the terminology, but retained the concept.

Re: Castle by the Sea

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 11:03 am
by Solomoriah
... okay, pushing out a new R6 now.