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Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2018 3:37 pm
by Solomoriah
Thank you sir!

Up to my elbows in transition prep, but I'll get to it soon.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2018 8:47 am
by quozl
My daughter read through the adventure and made some edits.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2018 10:14 am
by chiisu81
I've pulled CS1 from the Projects folder and will incorporate these edits soon. Thanks!

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2018 3:56 pm
by chiisu81
Quozl: I have integrated the textual changes you posted in r15 that I've put back in the Projects folder for Solo. Note that I did not make the changes from your file relating to either magical items (which should be capitalized and bold) nor NPC/Human stat-blocks (title included before the colon, Save stat removed as it's indicated by the level at the beginning), among some other things (how treasure is written out, as well as monster names). These are things covered in the Style Guide, which has been recently updated. I also left the listed spells for Severin, as Solo requested it.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2018 12:34 pm
by Solomoriah
Yes, I want all spellcasting NPCs to include a list of available spells. The GM may always change them, but should not be forced to think them up while running the adventure.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2018 8:06 pm
by quozl
Where can I find r15?

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2018 11:04 pm
by Solomoriah
It's in my Projects folder, waiting for me to review and re-PDF it. Should be up in a few days.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 10:01 am
by chiisu81
Uploading proposed r15 here.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Sun May 13, 2018 6:23 pm
by quozl
We made a couple of changes to Castle Under The Sea. We used Open Office's Track Changes so you can see them.

Re: CS1 Castle by the Sea

Posted: Mon May 14, 2018 7:16 pm
by chiisu81
Changes look good, I'll incorporate for r16. I need to give the others another read-through.