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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:03 pm

Yes, I think you did. I'll take a look later, when I'm on my home system.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Fri Jan 08, 2016 5:53 pm

Chi, if you have time, feel free to go ahead and download the contest submissions and make any corrections that have not yet been applied. Send each to me as you get it done, and when I have them all I'll pack up the combined version and upload it.

If you have time, as I say. If you can't get to it, let me know and I'll do the packing up part first.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Fri Jan 08, 2016 9:25 pm

Yep, I'll work on those and get them sent to you.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Fri Jan 08, 2016 9:44 pm

Thanks!
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Sat Jan 09, 2016 1:00 pm

Link to edited contest submissions sent to Solo.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Mon Jan 11, 2016 11:17 pm

I'm assembling the multimodule, and I've found a couple of issues with Fortress of the Barbarian Queen. To wit:

1) The Queen herself is rather complicated, a consequence of having all those Barbarian bits tacked on. I'd like to present a stripped-down version of that character as an alternative for those who don't use the Barbarian supplement but would like to run the adventure; we can retain the full details for those who want them.

2) More significantly, the adventure is for 2 to 6 characters, rather than 4 to 8. We should look it over carefully with an eye toward beefing it up a bit.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Mon Jan 11, 2016 11:55 pm

I just uploaded the first combined Castle by the Sea multimodule to the first post in this thread. I think it's already looking pretty good!

Two adventures still need blurbs, and I need to figure out how to cut down the ones that are there to keep it to one page. Or say less in my introduction... nah, that's just crazy talk.

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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:23 am

Solomoriah wrote:The Queen herself is rather complicated, a consequence of having all those Barbarian bits tacked on.
That's the motive why I didn't like the adventure. I like your idea of stripping all that can be taken from optional parts.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:37 am

Are we going to edit each adventure? I'd like to hear what people liked and didn't like about them as I'm using this as a learning experience to learn how to write adventures.
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Re: Castle by the Sea

Post Tue Jan 12, 2016 2:42 pm

quozl wrote:Are we going to edit each adventure? I'd like to hear what people liked and didn't like about them as I'm using this as a learning experience to learn how to write adventures.
I hope so. This was the first adventure I've ever written, so I would love to have whatever feedback people wanted to provide. The more brutal the better. :D
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