CS1 Castle by the Sea
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
I uploaded the new release in the first post of this thread, but then I realized... this is a complete multimodule that is on the print track. It belongs on the Downloads page. So, it's there!
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
Re: Castle by the Sea
I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:
Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers
List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.
Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"
Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers
List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.
Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"
Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
Thanks, AlMan! I'll get these changes take care of in the next release.
Please PM me your name as you'd like it to appear in the credits (as you are now an official member of the proofing team...)
See, that's how this project works. You want to be a proofer? Proofread something, and voila, you're in! You want to be an author or contributor? Just do it, and Bob is your proverbial uncle.
So welcome to the team!
Please PM me your name as you'd like it to appear in the credits (as you are now an official member of the proofing team...)
See, that's how this project works. You want to be a proofer? Proofread something, and voila, you're in! You want to be an author or contributor? Just do it, and Bob is your proverbial uncle.
So welcome to the team!
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
I'm a bad, bad man...
I'll see to it. Sorry for the oversight.
I'll see to it. Sorry for the oversight.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
Re: Castle by the Sea
I assumed you had a later revision on your computer with AlMan's edits anyways. Was gonna make another proofing pass soon so we can get this thing to print.
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
Corrected now. I added one with 2 HP.AlMan wrote:I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:
Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers
List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.
Fixed. I rewrote some of that description; the saving throw reference wasn't in standard form, and there was no explanation of what "grogginess" meant in game terms. Finally, I switched from "stat line" to "stat block" format to make the entry more standard.AlMan wrote:Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"
Fixed.AlMan wrote:Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
I also removed a reference to "gathering spell components" as that's not a feature of BFRPG.
I'll get a new release uploaded soon.
I'll get a new release uploaded soon.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Re: Castle by the Sea
Ack. Reread the "spell components" thing and understood what the author actually meant; revised the terminology, but retained the concept.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
- Solomoriah
- Site Admin
- Posts: 12499
- Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
- Location: LaBelle, Missouri
- Contact:
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests