CS1 Castle by the Sea

Creating game materials? Monsters, spells, classes, adventures? This is the place!
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

I uploaded the new release in the first post of this thread, but then I realized... this is a complete multimodule that is on the print track. It belongs on the Downloads page. So, it's there!
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
AlMan
Posts: 687
Joined: Fri Jun 26, 2015 5:01 pm

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by AlMan »

I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:

Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers

List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.

Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"


Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

Thanks, AlMan! I'll get these changes take care of in the next release.

Please PM me your name as you'd like it to appear in the credits (as you are now an official member of the proofing team...)

See, that's how this project works. You want to be a proofer? Proofread something, and voila, you're in! You want to be an author or contributor? Just do it, and Bob is your proverbial uncle.

So welcome to the team!
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
chiisu81
Posts: 4104
Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:05 pm

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by chiisu81 »

Along with AlMan I need a proofing/editing credit. :cry: :)
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

I'm a bad, bad man...

:D

I'll see to it. Sorry for the oversight.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
chiisu81
Posts: 4104
Joined: Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:05 pm

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by chiisu81 »

I assumed you had a later revision on your computer with AlMan's edits anyways. :) Was gonna make another proofing pass soon so we can get this thing to print.
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

AlMan wrote:I've only looked over the first couple adventures, I'll keep working on it. Here are the things I found:

Page 5
16. Thulid Sleeping Chambers

List of servants text says there are 5 total, only 4 are listed.
Corrected now. I added one with 2 HP.
AlMan wrote:Page 6
Mithridatium Bush description second paragraph
"harmed by by blunt" should be "harmed by blunt"
Fixed. I rewrote some of that description; the saving throw reference wasn't in standard form, and there was no explanation of what "grogginess" meant in game terms. Finally, I switched from "stat line" to "stat block" format to make the entry more standard.
AlMan wrote:Page 11
12. Stairs
"throne room" (area 14 below) should be "throne room" (area 16 below)
Since room 16 is described as the "throne" room
Fixed.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

I also removed a reference to "gathering spell components" as that's not a feature of BFRPG.

I'll get a new release uploaded soon.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

Ack. Reread the "spell components" thing and understood what the author actually meant; revised the terminology, but retained the concept.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
User avatar
Solomoriah
Site Admin
Posts: 12393
Joined: Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:15 pm
Location: LaBelle, Missouri
Contact:

Re: Castle by the Sea

Post by Solomoriah »

... okay, pushing out a new R6 now.
My personal site: www.gonnerman.org
Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Ahrefs [Bot] and 5 guests