Reclamation of Castle Devyn

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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Wed Sep 23, 2015 9:24 am

mTeasdale wrote:Chii, the two maps on the same page are a bit off. Do you think you can edit the two images to standardize/remove the white border on both ? If not, send them to me, I'll do it.
Worked on this, let me know if fixed.
Dimirag wrote:Chii, since r1 the files are named reclEmation, should that be change?
Fixed :) Also noticed the margins were mega-wide (I'm sure all my other stuff is affected too).
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Wed Sep 23, 2015 5:29 pm

Looks good !
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Thu Dec 17, 2015 7:41 am

r6 uploaded, corrected several spelling and other mistakes. Still have a little left to fill in before I can submit for AA2.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Thu Jan 07, 2016 2:22 pm

r7 uploaded; more corrections and a few more things filled out. Still have some left before I can submit for AA2.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Thu Jan 14, 2016 11:19 am

r8 uploaded. Just need to add some treasure and flesh out some room details.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Sun Jan 31, 2016 5:00 pm

I'd like to get feedback for this line of thinking: instead of trying to get each adventure of mine submitted for AA2, I'd like to combine Temple at Hillman Point (already in AA2) with Reclamation of Castle Devyn, Fane at Mount Shanaz, and possibly some more info on Gulshan island and perhaps another short adventure (or at least some one-shots) to create a small module similar to DC1 Tales of the Laughing Dragon. I'm not necessarily trying to pad the total page-count to get to print, but I think I'd like to collect all my Gulshan-related writings.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:23 pm

Get it over 32 pages and we'll get it in print.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:00 am

Final version R9 uploaded.
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Mon Jun 06, 2016 4:07 pm

I know its been some time since this was last looked at but here are my edits:
JL2 Reclamation of Castle Devyn
Pg 1 – The Torn Scroll Inn – paragraph 4
Currently: “No surprise that a group of you would show up, with all of the unexplained the troubles we've been having.”
Should be: “No surprise that a group of you would show up, with all the unexplained troubles we've been having.”

Pg 2 – Stories of the Castle – paragraph 5 after first text box.
Currently: This will start an argument where some of the fishermen will argue that the Duke left in a single ship and burnt the rest, others will argue that he never left, and the rest will argue that he wasn't that great and all the stories are about him are hokum.
Should be: This will start an argument where some of the fishermen will argue that the Duke left in a single ship and burnt the rest, others will argue that he never left, and the rest will argue that he wasn't that great and all the stories about him are hokum.

Pg 4 and Pg 5 – Wandering monster tables
Make the first column header as two rows to allow more room for the Encounter column. This will also help in limiting that large amount of dead space in the tables.

Pg 5 – Wandering monster table – Random chest entry
Bold improved weapons
Currently: 1 greatsword +1
Should be: 1 greatsword +1

Currently: The kilt offers +1 AC
Should be: The kilt offers +1 AC

Pg 6 – Gallus – Third paragraph
Name consistancey
Currently: …Gullan will point the way as well as offer the use of his make-shift bridge to cross the Nilletra,
Should be: …Gallus will point the way as well as offer the use of his make-shift bridge to cross the Nilletra,
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Re: Reclamation of Castle Devyn

Post Wed Jun 08, 2016 10:49 am

Thanks for the corrections Al, good eye!

Fixed the spacing in the encounter tables as well; I'm just now learning about using ctrl+tab in a table to insert a tabbed space...

R10 uploaded.
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