Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Sat Dec 02, 2017 7:44 pm

Thanks AlMan, I have added the changes to my edit, though I will leave the formatting changes to chiisu. You are currently credited as "AlMan", if you wish to be credited as as anything different then PM me or chiisu.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Sun Dec 03, 2017 9:30 am

Hi,

I've now finished the book so here's a few more typos/comments.

Shambling Mound, Lesser

Attacks are listed as '2'

Looking at the Shambler in the Core rulebook should this be '2 slams' ?

Snake, Rainbow

Attacks are listed as '1'

From the text this should be '1 bite'

Spirit of Vengeance

There are two asterisks after the armor class

Should these be after the hit dice instead?

Syrinx

Attacks are given as '2 claws + bite'

Shouldn't this be '2 claws/1 bite' ?

Damage for the three attacks is given as '1d10/1d10 + save or die'

Shouldn't this be '1d10/1d10/1d10 + poison' ?

Trobold

Treasure is given as 'P, Lair J (B/X stat)'

Should this be 'P each; J in lair' ?

Wanstrow

Attacks are listed as '2'

Not sure from the text what the attacks are '2 slams' perhaps?

Wasp, Giant

Attacks given as '1 sting + poison'

Poison is the damage not the attack so this should be '1 sting'

Worm-Man

Is the speed correct because worms are usually slow things. If the speed is still in Labyrinth Lord format then the correct speed should be 30'

Attacks are listed as '1'

From the text this should be '1 weapon'

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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Sun Dec 03, 2017 9:56 am

Thanks Andy, I have integrated these points into my edit.
For the Syrinx the attacks are correct as it may only bite when both claws hit the same foe, though it should be poison in the damage.
Regarding the number of attacks, not every creature in the core rules has the attack named, and so it is not necessary to detail it, provided the creature has only a single type of attack.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Fri Dec 15, 2017 11:13 am

I uploaded r28.

Coldrage, at your convenience remove your copy of r28 from the Projects folder and use the just-uploaded r28 to continue where you left off for r29, still using track changes as before for my benefit. Thanks!
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Sat Dec 16, 2017 10:23 am

Here is my take on the Chupacabra. I hope you'll like it !
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Sun Dec 17, 2017 6:05 am

And here is my version of the Norker :
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Mon Dec 18, 2017 9:01 am

These are fantastic! 8-) I've added them and your credit for r29.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Post Mon Dec 18, 2017 10:59 am

Thanks ! I will soon post a Tree-Fox...
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Post Mon Dec 18, 2017 1:40 pm

I just noticed a few mistakes on the Norker, which are now corrected :
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Post Mon Dec 18, 2017 1:43 pm

And here is what a Tree Fox looks like to me :
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