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Announcing!
The Basic Fantasy Field Guide Volume 1, Release 40 -- August 23, 2020
More revisions and corrections courtesy of new contributors daryen and Seven from the forum, as well as numerous corrections by James Lemon, have resulted in this new release. Not sure at this point if it is a print release candidate or not; check the forum thread for updates.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html#fieldguide

Hippocampus/Kelpie

Kelpie Description should probably add that it can cast Charm Person (to trick their victim into mounting it as it rides into a lake or rescue its human form from drowning.)

Linnorm

It says it can "breath a cloud of fetid gas much like a dragon's breath", so why not just say it's 7d8 points of damage?

Alright, so what size? Maybe 30' x 80' cloud like a green dragon of the same size?

Those changes are probably small enough to be made without breaking the flow.

Seven wrote: ↑Thu Aug 27, 2020 2:37 pm Linnorm

It says it can "breath a cloud of fetid gas much like a dragon's breath", so why not just say it's 7d8 points of damage?

Alright, so what size? Maybe 30' x 80' cloud like a green dragon of the same size?

Those changes are probably small enough to be made without breaking the flow.

Also with the linnorm, there is nothing in the description about the poison in its bite. There is a lot of blank space on that page, there should be plenty of room for adding a couple sentences.

r41 in Projects. Added teaman's vampire spawn and wug illustrations. Also adjusted the levels on a few other images. Revised the linnorm and kelpie entries.

chiisu81 wrote: ↑Fri Feb 05, 2021 9:10 am r41 in Projects. Added teaman's vampire spawn and wug illustrations. Also adjusted the levels on a few other images. Revised the linnorm and kelpie entries.

Thanks so much! Can't wait to see it.

I'll look at the Linnorm.

I'm not the one fixing the flow, but nothing screams new print candidate like new illustrations.