Basic Fantasy Field Guide Volume 1
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Ack. Just pushed an updated R29 PDF... please check it out.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
R29 looks ok; if no-one else finds anything I think we'll be good for new print release.
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Lulu is updated as of right now. CreateSpace is doing the usual dance, and will probably be up to date tomorrow.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
Great, thank you! Downloads entry will need to be updated at some point.
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CreateSpace has it now.
And the Downloads page is updated too. No need to prompt me about it...
And the Downloads page is updated too. No need to prompt me about it...
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
Page 59 Rabbit Prince second paragraph:
"The prince rabbit attacks with.."
shouldn't it be
"The rabbit prince attacks with.."
Page 60 Rabbit Prince (continued):
"Instead of attacking a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."
Inserting a comma after attacking, looks and sounds better to me. There should be a slight pause before continuing the sentence.
"Instead of attacking, a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."
"The prince rabbit attacks with.."
shouldn't it be
"The rabbit prince attacks with.."
Page 60 Rabbit Prince (continued):
"Instead of attacking a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."
Inserting a comma after attacking, looks and sounds better to me. There should be a slight pause before continuing the sentence.
"Instead of attacking, a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
Yeah, I've noticed there are still some rough spots. When time permits, I want to go through and rewrite all the awkward bits.
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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
I've started work on r30 with track changes enabled.
Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide
Yikes, too many changes to have track changes enabled, Solo would have a stroke. Working on R30 and then sending to him. So glad I already made a tablet-friendly version, will have to be updated soon as well.
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