Basic Fantasy Field Guide

[Solomoriah]

Ack. Just pushed an updated R29 PDF... please check it out.

[chiisu81]

R29 looks ok; if no-one else finds anything I think we'll be good for new print release.

[Solomoriah]

Lulu is updated as of right now. CreateSpace is doing the usual dance, and will probably be up to date tomorrow.

[chiisu81]

Great, thank you! Downloads entry will need to be updated at some point.

[Solomoriah]

CreateSpace has it now.

And the Downloads page is updated too. No need to prompt me about it...

[vskull]

Page 59 Rabbit Prince second paragraph:

"The prince rabbit attacks with.."

shouldn't it be

"The rabbit prince attacks with.."

Page 60 Rabbit Prince (continued):

"Instead of attacking a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."

Inserting a comma after attacking, looks and sounds better to me. There should be a slight pause before continuing the sentence.

"Instead of attacking, a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."

[Solomoriah]

Yeah, I've noticed there are still some rough spots. When time permits, I want to go through and rewrite all the awkward bits.

[chiisu81]

I've started work on r30 with track changes enabled.

[chiisu81]

Yikes, too many changes to have track changes enabled, Solo would have a stroke. Working on R30 and then sending to him. So glad I already made a tablet-friendly version, will have to be updated soon as well.

[chiisu81]

R30 sent to Solo.