Noticed a couple typos. pg. 6: Under 11. Private Bedroom: ...huge silver-backed mirror or excellent quality... should be: of (not sure about this one) pg. 7 Under 16. Private Meeting Room ...His wife Ebony (with 38 HP)... should be: ...His wife , Ebony (with 38 HP) , ... pg. 163 Under Wand of Metal...

Clever_Munkey wrote:Never mind I understand the numbers, but I made this Excel sheet anyway.

Solomoriah will have to add you to the proofers if you aren't already listed.

Storm Giant Citadel Magic Trunk: AC 15, HD 5, #At none, Dam none, Mv 40', Sv F5, *** Ml n/a *** Hill Giant Hall Key to Map 2: Main Dungeon Level Wandering Monsters 2. 3d6 giant rats scurrying about in search of food (see wandering monsters level 1 entry #1 and room #1 on the first level). Caverns of...

Page 6, room 6 "whichh" ("hh")

169 missing line for "Fire Giant Forge Copyright 2012-...."

Just emailed second copy with minor fixes.
10/27/2015

He loves GURPS, hates D&D. That's his shtick.

I just sent it to Solomoriah via email. Didn't have much to change and not enough time to look at it any more.

I downloaded a copy and am looking for any subtle changes I'd wanna make.

If you need to chop out monsters (reducing hit point box counts etc.) to help stabilize the flow in any of these, do so. I'm really getting bored of rooms stuffed with monsters. modules And/or shorten any of the text to "just the facts".

... "20. GUARD ROOM: The hobgoblins posted here also help guard against the creatures who reside in the western area, who have defied being exterminated. The corridor west has been piled with rubble to keep them out, and the guards have six vials of holy water ready. Each has 1d6 sp." bec...