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by AlMan
Tue Feb 25, 2020 11:33 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill
Replies: 16
Views: 1647

Re: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill

Here is what I did to get to r8: Made sure that last line of HP blocks is set to HPBlockEnd Style. Page 8 – 4. 1d4+1 Assassin Vines – HP Blocks The one with 32 only had 20 boxes. Added another line of 12 boxes. Page 8 – 6. 10d4 Pixies – HP Blocks Put into two columns. Page 9 – 8. 2d6 Brush Horrors –...
by AlMan
Sun Feb 23, 2020 11:01 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill
Replies: 16
Views: 1647

Re: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill

Thanks once again for the excellent editing. Regarding #2, yes all of the ghouls come from area 11. As far as the HP boxes on the random encounter tables go, what is the correct format for a variable number of creatures? Should I randomly generate the maximal number HP lines (e.g. 8 lines for 2d4 c...
by AlMan
Sat Feb 22, 2020 8:34 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill
Replies: 16
Views: 1647

Re: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill

Had a couple of questions for Sean to look at on this:

Pages 7 and 8
Need HP boxes for the creatures in the Random Encounter Tables

In the Camp Random Encounter Tables #6 has a note that the Ghouls are part of the group from Area 11. Is the same true for the Ghouls in Encounters 7 and 12?
by AlMan
Sat Feb 22, 2020 8:31 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill
Replies: 16
Views: 1647

Re: [AA3] The Ruined Sawmill

Did an editing pass on this and here is what I found: All stat blocks, add non-breaking spaces where needed. Change all Move header from ‘MV’ to ‘Mv’ Page 2 – Places of Interest – Parageraph 1 Was: well-travelled Changed to: well-traveled Page 2 – Places of Interest – Paragraph 3 Was: travellers Cha...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 20, 2020 11:35 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord
Replies: 24
Views: 2893

Re: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord

I was thinking of the crypt system as a singular whole (catacomb) instead of the plural crypts (graves) that are in the complex.

The author of this one was online last week so we may get a response.
by AlMan
Thu Feb 20, 2020 1:09 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord
Replies: 24
Views: 2893

Re: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord

I also had a few things that I didn't fix, but may need an answer for: Page 3 – Entrance and Main Corridor – Paragraph 2 Awkward language. Currently: While the complex is located in the rock of the cavern floors, the crypt itself is constructed from smoothly cut stone. Suggest: While the rest of the...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 20, 2020 12:26 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord
Replies: 24
Views: 2893

Re: [AA3] The Crypt of the Forgotten Lord

Here are the corrections I made: Page 7 – 9. The Descent – Boxed text Awkward language, descend and downward both mean the same thing. Was: The stairs descend downward. Change to: The stairs descend for 10 feet at the bottom is a 10 foot hall that turns to the right and goes for anther 10 feet. Page...
by AlMan
Wed Feb 19, 2020 1:28 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs
Replies: 38
Views: 7930

Re: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs

Page 4 and Page 10 – Random Monsters Moved from page 10 to page 4 after the table. Page 10 – Magic Users – PC Seven and PC Eight Per Solo’s suggestion removed the Leather Armor from the equipment list and set the AC to 11. Page 10 – Thieves – PC Ten Per Solo’s suggestion removed the Shield from the ...
by AlMan
Tue Feb 18, 2020 11:42 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs
Replies: 38
Views: 7930

Re: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs

Here are some things I had questions about for orobourus, Chii or Solo: Should the Random Monsters detailed on pages 10 and 11 be brought up to be after the table of Wandering Monsters on page 3. Page 9 – Magic Users – PC Seven and PC Eight The equipment lists for both Magic Users have Leather Armor...
by AlMan
Tue Feb 18, 2020 11:37 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs
Replies: 38
Views: 7930

Re: [AA3] A Temple of Slides and Stairs

Here is my list of corrections for A Temple of Slides and Stairs: Page 4 – 1. Entryway – Paragraph 1 after boxed text. Corrected spelling Was: abilty Changed to: ability Page 4 – 1. Entryway – Paragraph 2 after boxed text. Since the Magic Net is an item and not just a spell capitalized name per Styl...