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by AlMan
Wed Sep 25, 2019 10:28 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Thanks! I just cleaned up a few glaringly obvious things and am reposting this as a final entry. I hope you all find it fun to read and play. Ruzzzr, I had to make some changes to get this into more of a BFRPG Style. Here is a list of what I did, there are other misspellings, but I realize they are...
by AlMan
Fri Sep 20, 2019 8:13 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Basic Fantasy Field Guide Volume 2
Replies: 466
Views: 83990

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2

Here are my edits for Basic Fantasy Field Guide R34 Page 3 Amalgam – The last paragraph says that non-magical weapons will not work on these creatures, the AC doesn’t have the double dagger symbol to show this. Page 12 Bloodshroud – Second paragraph Currently: The bloodshroud receives half of any da...
by AlMan
Thu Sep 19, 2019 11:09 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

But just imagine how easy the adventure would be for the players if the dungeon isn't stocked or anything. ;) Hmmm, I may have to do that some time, just give a description of the rooms and have nothing in the place. Any thing that moves is just from the wind of a storm. Have several 'paranormal' k...
by AlMan
Thu Sep 19, 2019 10:44 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Equipment Emporium Supplement
Replies: 222
Views: 43257

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

And make sure Newbie Salmon gets a proofing credit too. :)
by AlMan
Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:24 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Minky,
It looks like you attached the original file instead of your new entry. Give it another shot, its all OK.
by AlMan
Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:12 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Basic Fantasy Field Guide Volume 1
Replies: 818
Views: 134091

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 1

Here is what I found in Field Guide 1 Release 35 Page 4 Last paragraph of Ankheg description: Currently: In desperation, an ankheg can spit line of acid; … Should be: In desperation, an ankheg can spit a line of acid; … Page 7 Winged Ape illustration covers the lower portion of the letters of the pa...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 10:08 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Yes, I found more mistakes as I was preparing my list last night. Replace all Narthax with Narthex. Page 4 replace braken with bracken. Page 5 replace trist with tryst. Page 7 replace staticly with statically Page 9 replace Preistess’ with Priestess’ Page 10 replace hallwall with hallway. Page 10 re...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 12:47 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

And yet, I fail to accurately look over my own work. Over the years of writing computer instructions and working on the projects here, I've found that editing your own work is the hardest thing to do. Your brain knows what you want to say and just fills in missing words or overlooks mistakes that y...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 1:58 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Al, thank you so very much. Amazing what mistakes are still very easily made even with an MA in English. :lol: The help is very much appreciated, and edits will definitely be made. Any thoughts on the level and monster balance? Minky Boodle, You're welcome. You are probably more qualified to make e...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 1:40 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: CS2 The Dark Temple
Replies: 181
Views: 5345

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

For clarity and openness to everyone, here is a list of what I found wrong in my own original post of The Temple of the Seas. Page 3 – 4. Offering Room 2 Insert ‘crusader’ between newer and religion, to distinguish that it was new when the crusade was called. Current: … the pommel of the weapons car...