Here are the edits for Version 27: Page 2; Advi, Avenger, Advi, Charity, and Advi, Diligence Since you said the name sections are correct, the names will need to be reversed in the descriptions Avenger Advi, Charity Advi and Diligence Advi respectively. Page 22, Diabolus, paragraph 2 - Currently - d...

I was looking for some information while reviewing FG2 and noticed these issues: Basic Fantasy Core Rules version 3 Throughout the rules there are different spellings of chain mail chain mail chainmail Throughout the rules there are different spellings of plate mail. plate mail platemail Throughout ...

Here is my long list of corrections and questions for the first half of FG2: Basic Fantasy Field Guide 2 Edits Title Page; Contributors – Please change AlMan to Alan Vetter, please. Whole book;{General question) headers have the name of the module and Monsters, will this eventually have the first an...

Ladies and Gents here is a simple intro adventure, please give it a read through and let me know your thoughts.

Thank you,

AlMan

Starting to read Terranum: Knight's Fall by Harold Cloninger, a local author that was at the Des Moines Ren Faire this year.

Next on my list CS1 - Castle by the Sea: Castle of the Unkown; Page 14; 20. Hall of Chaos; 2nd paragraph after monster description - Currently: If he escapes, he will wreak saltatory mischief upon the countryside. Saltatory is the Latin term for how nerve signals are sent from one nerve cell to anot...

I'd hate to have you hold it up for me. I'll see how far I get in the next day or so. When were you thinking of re-posting it? Cryanhall, thank you for looking into this. Don't worry about holding up the module, since your help is making it a better product. :) I know I held up a print release of J...

After a summer of taking care of personal issues, I'm back with this set of corrections. Page 25 7. Philibert’s Chamber third paragraph after the boxed text. Current – The northern part of the mural is painted on several wooden planks… Should be – The southern part of the mural is painted on several...

These all work in Version 16. Page 12 Monster 47 The Doppleganger should have #At 1 fist Level 3 Page 17 Monster 02 The Giant Tiger Beetles should have #At 1 bite Page 17 Monster 03 The Giant Tiger Beetles should have #At 1 bite Page 20 Monster 34 The Giant Tiger Beetles should have #At 1 bite Page ...

May also want to look at the copyright year, bring it up to 2017.