teaman wrote: ↑Mon Mar 22, 2021 5:14 am

Francisco-art wrote: ↑Sun Mar 21, 2021 11:35 pm Awesome paint job on that owlbear, sir!

Thanks Francisco: he's all ready to eat a party of adventures.

Except bards, he does have some standards, you know.

Dinner and a show, saves the bard for last.

Great work again Teaman!!!

A very happy BDay Chiisu81!!!!!! Enjoy your day!!!!

That map looks great Borgar!!! I'll be using it, thank you!!!!

First picture from Perseverance. Hopefully he doesn't find the Q-36 Space Modulator that NASA uses to get the rovers up to Mars.

Page 13. "Fader Vineknock will tell the party to go to the mouth of the Grim River there is a logging concern and ships headed to Corvis stop to pick up loads of lumber." That should probably be 2 sentences. "There are two routes that ships will use one goes almost straight west and follows the nor...

This is a really great little series of adventures. I love it! Well done sir. Thank you, Captain!! :D Also I would like to give you some credit, since I used some features of the Hexcrawl Adventures to build lairs that I've made so far, doing dice drops and getting some rooms and features for the l...

Room 1. "the feeling fo being watched." should be "for". Actually I think it should be "of" instead of "for", my fingers are dyslexic that way. Also, if you see any "ot" it would probably be "to". Since this version of influenza is "magically enhanced" it would last longer. I'll wrap up all your co...

Seven wrote: ↑Wed Feb 10, 2021 9:56 pm It it's OK to just point out corrections.

Page 3. "sever heresy" should be "severe heresy".

"day light" could be "daylight".

Thank you, Seven, how do you want to be credited as a proofreader?

chiisu81 wrote: ↑Fri Feb 05, 2021 8:27 am *opens document expecting a dozen pages or so*

This version is probably the fifth longest book if my page counts are correct, it would easily pass AA2 to be the fourth longest when it is finished.

I uploaded R2 to the first post, with many of the things we've talked about including a start on the book (at the end of the module). Lots of descriptions left to write there, and I need to look over BF3 and JN2 and break up the entries for them. For JN2 the adventures marked with an 'R' are what I...