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by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 12:47 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

And yet, I fail to accurately look over my own work. Over the years of writing computer instructions and working on the projects here, I've found that editing your own work is the hardest thing to do. Your brain knows what you want to say and just fills in missing words or overlooks mistakes that y...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 1:58 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Al, thank you so very much. Amazing what mistakes are still very easily made even with an MA in English. :lol: The help is very much appreciated, and edits will definitely be made. Any thoughts on the level and monster balance? Minky Boodle, You're welcome. You are probably more qualified to make e...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 1:40 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

For clarity and openness to everyone, here is a list of what I found wrong in my own original post of The Temple of the Seas. Page 3 – 4. Offering Room 2 Insert ‘crusader’ between newer and religion, to distinguish that it was new when the crusade was called. Current: … the pommel of the weapons car...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 16, 2019 12:08 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Minky Boodle, here are some edits I did for your entry and what I did to get it into more of the BFRPG Style. Most of it was changing the styles for the Monsters and getting the HP Blocks into the standard style. There is also a list of suggestions, I didn't want to change your text too much, I did ...
by AlMan
Sun Sep 15, 2019 7:57 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

I have updated the original post of my adventure to Release 3, after going through an edit session or two over the weekend I found a large number of mistakes and half hinted wording. Hope this one will be better. Yes, even an editor can make mistakes the first time, or two, or three, through reading...
by AlMan
Mon Sep 09, 2019 9:42 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

I'll make sure my calculations are correct.

May I suggest having one of our great artist do an isometric map of level two? This map seems like it would be more understandable in an isometric view.
by AlMan
Sun Sep 08, 2019 10:14 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD
Replies: 50
Views: 1153

Re: The Dark Temple CONTEST ENTRY THREAD

Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you my humble submission for your perusal, The Temple of the Seas. Please let me know if there are any spelling or grammer errors, it will also need to have copywrite info pulled from all three Field Guides. Thank you in advance for any corrections that may be found and ...
by AlMan
Sun Aug 25, 2019 4:59 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Equipment Emporium Supplement
Replies: 213
Views: 39932

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Also make sure he gets a proofing credit.
by AlMan
Sat Aug 24, 2019 10:52 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Equipment Emporium Supplement
Replies: 213
Views: 39932

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

:oops:
by AlMan
Wed Aug 21, 2019 11:46 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Equipment Emporium Supplement
Replies: 213
Views: 39932

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Solomoriah wrote:
Tue Aug 20, 2019 8:51 am
Hey, Al... I was just looking at your r19, and I noticed you're credited as "Alan" in the copyright, but "Al" in the proofer's section. Which do you prefer?
Al, Alan, or SOB I usually answer to any of them. For consistency let's just use Alan.