Nice little adventure. Here are the edits I made: Page 1 – Introduction – Paragraph 6 Changed ‘one’ to ‘once’. Page 4 – 7 Conference Room Alpha – Treasure description Changed missle to missile. Page 4 – 11 Long Hallway – Paragraph 1 Changed ‘opotune’ with ‘opportune’. Page 4 – 12 Makeshift Bedroom C...

I just gave this a play through this weekend. I'm pretty new to being GM so bear that in mind. My group only had two PCs so I halved all the NPC numbers and that seemed to scale pretty well and whole thing took a couple hours, so that was enough to satisfy the players for an impromptu evening game....

So I've continued writing for a bit and updated the document to 2.0 and uploaded it in my original post. Seems it's gonna be a fairly long adventure, but not long enough for it's on module. Here is another Edit session: Page 2 – What’s really going on? - paragraph 1 Changed “else s” to “else’s”. Pa...

I made an editing pass on this one: Made it so there are two spaces between sentences. Page 2 – Dwarves paragraph Changed ancentral to ancestral. Page 2 – Orcs paragraph and Giants paragraph Changed ellipsis (…) to comma (,). Page 3 – Point 1 under Information section Changed waystation to way stati...

Jobend, Thank you for your submission, attached to this post is my first pass at your adventure. I also took the time to put it into the Adventure Module format so it has the two columns and the right fonts. I also made some slight changes to the spelling and grammar of the story, please look it ove...

That's as scary as I thought it would be. Could you put a tail on it and I think it would be finished.

I could see this being a Drider's pet.

Solomoriah wrote: ↑

Wed Nov 13, 2019 1:04 am

How would you guys feel about making this a print release candidate?

That would be fine with me. If you think it is good enough.

Here is the meme the Catspider came from, it was on the Horror Fans FB page. Maybe one of our fantastic artist can come up with what is behind the drapes. I'm thinking a spider type body with the same pattern of the cat fur and a cat's tail on that. Also another set of legs pointing to the back.

Your monopod thief drawing reminds me of the Dufflepud mentioned in the Basic Fantasy Field Guide Volume 2. Great drawings!

Catspider Armor Class: 13 Hit Dice: 1d3 HP* No. of Attacks: 1 bite/4 claws Damage: 1d4/1d2/1d2/1d2/1d2 all + poison Movement: 50' No. Appearing: 1 Save As: Fighter: 1 Morale: 8 Treasure Type: None XP: 13 A catspider is a scary creature that looks like a cat, except that it has eight legs. The catsp...