R14 contains an added word on page 12: "If asked about the sword, Lochli says it can be taken if pulled out."

Your artwork is AMAZING! The owis never looked so good!

I think an AA is right where it belongs. I don't have plans to make it a series right now. Other stuff in the works that will do that instead.

I love this, specially the Anubians! Knew they'd make a cool race the minute I saw them in the field guide.

Thank you so much for your feedback, Seven, you've helped immensely. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Here's the R12 odt with some wording corrections and added mechanics to some of the magic items.

R11 contains wording fixes in the map room following Seven's suggestions. The description now focuses on the immediate danger first rather than how the room looks. It also contains a damage threshold to the iron door leading to Rary's Suite, should the party fail to pick the lock.

Here's r10 with corrections to one of the four goblins as well as some wording corrections and addition of further missing info on dungeon monsters!

r9 odt
Modifications made to some wording and treasure found in barrows.
Attack Bonuses and Hit Dice missing on some encounters in the dungeon. Those have been added.

R8 odt
various grammar and wording issues fixed.
Attack Bonuses added to Vandr NPCs.
Kell's HP reduced to fit his level.

Thanks a ton, Seven, this is great.

Thank you, Seven, I would have missed that completely. Updated and submitted here.
"Few" on page 2 now lower case. "Track" on page 2 now says "trek", which is much more appropriate.