Here's the other one I managed to tidy up. Let me know your thoughts.
This adventure can be found in AA2 on the Downloads page.
[AA2] Wulfric's Tomb
- John Dutton
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Re: Wulfric's Tomb
Re-uploaded r1 with spelling corrections; also re-named all references to the DM as GM, as BFRPG uses that term.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
R2 uploaded to first post. Bit more polish added as this may go into AA2 with John's 2 other adventures.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
I don't know about version 9 yet, but I did do an edit of version 2.
Wulfric's Tomb Corrections
Page 2 – Orc stats
All the stats contain the weapon name in the damage area. The other adventures have the weapon name in the Attack area.
Currently:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6 (short bow/hand axe), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Suggest:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/hand axe, Dam 1d6, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Page 2 – Fern’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow should be shortbow to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Oaken’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow and short sword should be shortbow and shortsword to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Wilderness Encounters
Currently:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d4 (short sword/sling), Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Suggest:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 shortsword/sling, Dam 1d6/1d4, Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Currently:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d8 (short bow/sword), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Suggest:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/longsword, Dam 1d6/1d8, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Also in the Equipment section
Page 7 – Skeleton Ogre
Currently:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1, Dam 2d6 (giant warhammer), Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Suggest:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1 giant warhammer, Dam 2d6, Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Page 9
Stairway to 14 should use the up stairs indicator and the the ones going to 12 should use the downstairs indicator.
The numbers to the left should indicate 12 – 13 on the right it should indicate 14 – 16 and to the top 17-20, to indicate that there are more rooms in those directions.
Page 10
Crossroads and Storerooms – stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Queens’ Burial Chamber - stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Update proofreader list.
Wulfric's Tomb Corrections
Page 2 – Orc stats
All the stats contain the weapon name in the damage area. The other adventures have the weapon name in the Attack area.
Currently:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6 (short bow/hand axe), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Suggest:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/hand axe, Dam 1d6, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Page 2 – Fern’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow should be shortbow to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Oaken’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow and short sword should be shortbow and shortsword to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Wilderness Encounters
Currently:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d4 (short sword/sling), Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Suggest:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 shortsword/sling, Dam 1d6/1d4, Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Currently:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d8 (short bow/sword), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Suggest:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/longsword, Dam 1d6/1d8, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Also in the Equipment section
Page 7 – Skeleton Ogre
Currently:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1, Dam 2d6 (giant warhammer), Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Suggest:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1 giant warhammer, Dam 2d6, Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Page 9
Stairway to 14 should use the up stairs indicator and the the ones going to 12 should use the downstairs indicator.
The numbers to the left should indicate 12 – 13 on the right it should indicate 14 – 16 and to the top 17-20, to indicate that there are more rooms in those directions.
Page 10
Crossroads and Storerooms – stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Queens’ Burial Chamber - stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Update proofreader list.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
Heh yeah meant R2. R3 uploaded to first post. Will need to work on editing the map images later.
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