Saving Throw Options
Saving Throw Options
So, as I said on the forum last week, I decided to try my luck on a Saving Throw supplement.
Guys, I really want your comments, critics, ideas, and so on. I will also probably need a little help on the spelling and grammar, as English is not my first language.
Solo, I posted it in the Showcase, if you prefer to remove it for now, that's ok. I just thought that would be easier this way.
Download links :
OpenOffice : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.odt
PDF : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.pdf
Guys, I really want your comments, critics, ideas, and so on. I will also probably need a little help on the spelling and grammar, as English is not my first language.
Solo, I posted it in the Showcase, if you prefer to remove it for now, that's ok. I just thought that would be easier this way.
Download links :
OpenOffice : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.odt
PDF : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.pdf
Last edited by mTeasdale on Tue Jan 13, 2015 7:14 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Saving Throw Options
If I gave you Showcase privileges, it's because I trust you. As long as your publication is "complete" (no parts left out that you intend to add "later"), that's all that matters.mTeasdale wrote:Solo, I posted it in the Showcase, if you prefer to remove it for now, that's ok. I just thought that would be easier this way.
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Re: Saving Throw Options
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: extra space before the colon
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: correct "its the target number" to "it's..."
First Option sub-header: extra space before colon
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "Finally, Will measure" to "...measures..."
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "affect" to "affects"
Second Option sub-header: extra space before colon
Second Option, 3rd paragraph: correct spelling of "Additionnally" (remove extra n)
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: correct "its the target number" to "it's..."
First Option sub-header: extra space before colon
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "Finally, Will measure" to "...measures..."
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "affect" to "affects"
Second Option sub-header: extra space before colon
Second Option, 3rd paragraph: correct spelling of "Additionnally" (remove extra n)
Re: Saving Throw Options
I like it, I know its not "old school" but I prefer the 3 save categories, over the old 5 categories.
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Re: Saving Throw Options
I prefer the "old school" five categories personally, but this is a nice addition to the supplement pool. For me, it would prove most useful in conversion of adventures from d20 or S&W to BFRPG.
Nice job!
Nice job!
Re: Saving Throw Options
Thanks chiisu ! I corrected all that stuff and a few others things and then added a picture. R2 uploaded.chiisu81 wrote:Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: extra space before the colon
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: correct "its the target number" to "it's..."
First Option sub-header: extra space before colon
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "Finally, Will measure" to "...measures..."
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "affect" to "affects"
Second Option sub-header: extra space before colon
Second Option, 3rd paragraph: correct spelling of "Additionnally" (remove extra n)
Thanks for the good comments guys !
Re: Saving Throw Options
Be sure to add an image credit for Sudsy (Michael Sutherland)
Re: Saving Throw Options
My bad, I wanted to do it and totally forgot. Will do it as soon as possible. By the way, do you want me to add you for checking out spelling and grammar ?chiisu81 wrote:Be sure to add an image credit for Sudsy (Michael Sutherland)
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A proofing credit would be appreciated (James Lemon)
Re: Saving Throw Options
James "chiisu81" Lemmon really ought to be on every document's credit list. He proofs everything.chiisu81 wrote:A proofing credit would be appreciated (James Lemon)
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