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I've applied the edits jhhoffmann provided and will be posting R15 soon...

Gold in the Hills still says Introduction in the header.

Dang. It looks good on the screen right before I generate the PDF.

I'll have to watch it directly next time. Well, this one has some flow issues still.

Take a look and see if any art (including maps) appears to be missing, would you?

All other images, maps, etc. look good. While hammering out things, it was pointed out that the pipe beast monster wasn't really explained; does it need to be added at the end of Merilla's Tower as a new creature? If so it's in the New Monsters doc.

R16:
Page 54 - image is too low
Page 75 and 76 - images/maps missing
OGL page - may as well update copyright date for BFRPG to 2016
OGL page - need to insert copyright line for Field Guide below BFRPG
Page 42 - while spells names are normally not capitalized, in this list it looks weird not to be
Insect Valhalla - does a note to see the Field Guide need to be with each entry/encounter, or can it just be a one-time note at the beginning like most adventures do?
Pages 5, 8, 9, 10, 13, 17, 19, 21, 22, 41, 43 - magic items are bold but not capitalized

Missing images are a constant battle with Libreoffice, I'm sad to say. You have to use the F5 dialog to find and reactivate them. I went through on R16 and gave them all meaningful names so I can find them more easily.

R17 emailed to Solo.

Downloading it now. I'll get a PDF built and upload both to the main Downloads page, maybe tonight. I have a convention to get ready for tomorrow, so I may not have time.

This new release includes further edits by James Lemon. This is not a print release candidate, as there are flow issues with the first adventure that may require artwork to fix.

I'm not seeing any flow issues, just me?

Sorry. Too many large white spaces in Merilla's Magic Tower to suit me. Was unable to hammer out a better layout.