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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2017 7:27 am
by chiisu81
Al (and others), here's R16.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:07 pm
by AlMan
Edits for DC1 – Tales from the Laughing Dragon r16
Page 3 – Kobold Hunting Party stat block
Monster stats are in parenthesis.
Page 12 – Mercenary Guards stat block
Monster stats are in parenthesis.
Page 16 – 10E. Surprise! - Orc Archer stats
spelling
Currently:
bow
Suggest:
shortbow
Page 24 – 4. Commander’s Office – Girck stats
The magic weapons are bolded in the other areas.
Page 27 – 9. The Keeper of the Catacombs – Zombie stats
Monster stats have a closing parenthesis.
You should look through the posts so others, like Tommie Brander, that deserve it get proofing credit too.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 7:18 am
by chiisu81
Good catches as always Al! Thanks for pointer on proofing credits, didn't realize your name wasn't there either.
Found one other lone parenthesis, so I'm gonna do one more pass on the statblocks and then I think we'll be good for new release.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:09 am
by chiisu81
R17 emailed to Solo.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2017 7:46 am
by chiisu81
R17 posted by Solo.
This print release candidate includes corrections by Al Vetter and James Lemon
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2017 2:04 pm
by chiisu81
R17 looks good. Unless someone else spots something in the near future, I think we'll be good for a new print release.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2017 9:24 am
by Solomoriah
One week from today, at the earliest. So April 18th, maybe.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 10:56 am
by chiisu81
Looks like this should be good for new print release.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 3:47 pm
by Solomoriah
Uploading to Lulu now, then CreateSpace. This means that this document will be offline on CreateSpace from tonight until sometime over the weekend.
Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 5:09 pm
by Solomoriah
Live on Lulu.com as of now. Waiting for review on CreateSpace.com.