DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
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Also, I just pushed R10 to the downloads page. Give it a once-over, if you would. Thanks!
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Page 7: 18. Watchdogs - needs a colon after (to maintain consistency with room names/headers)
Page 16-17: 9b. through 13. - Same
Page 22: 2. Musty Bedroom - Same
Page 24: 6. through 10. - Same
Page 16-17: 9b. through 13. - Same
Page 22: 2. Musty Bedroom - Same
Page 24: 6. through 10. - Same
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And now I'm pushing R11 to the downloads page...
The "SURPRISE!" room didn't get a colon; I consider this a valid deviation. The others are all fixed, and I also fixed a bunch of commas with a space in front of them (all in stat strings for monsters).
The "SURPRISE!" room didn't get a colon; I consider this a valid deviation. The others are all fixed, and I also fixed a bunch of commas with a space in front of them (all in stat strings for monsters).
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Sorry I missed this.. Looks good to me in black!
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Great, thanks! Now, if Chi will give the R11 PDF his blessing, I'll get this uploaded to Lulu and CreateSpace!
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Intro: change to "... three-part adventure series..."
Page 26, #9: room header needs a colon
Otherwise looks good!
Page 26, #9: room header needs a colon
Otherwise looks good!
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... so now, R12.
I changed the flow a bit, so eye it closely please.
I changed the flow a bit, so eye it closely please.
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Excellent! I'll try to get this out in print tonight, or perhaps tomorrow night.
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Okay, it's done! DC1 is now updated to the new, dark-covered 2nd Edition R12 on Lulu.com, and will be available on CreateSpace.com and Amazon.com tomorrow.
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