DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon
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Now that I know I do! I do it when writing emails at work all the time but luckily Outlook is good at catching it..
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Do you still have this for R5?chiisu81 wrote:I've emailed the cleaned up pic to you Solo.
I'd still like to get the images/maps to work on.
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Another double word:
"down down" on Page 21.
In:
After sitting down down, Fonkin stands up to address the party.
"down down" on Page 21.
In:
After sitting down down, Fonkin stands up to address the party.
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Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.
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Lemme look at that... It should read after the party sits down or after the party has a seat.
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It's not needed, as earlier it's already stating they're sitting down. Simply revise to "Fonkin stands up to address the party".Solomoriah wrote:Take out the extra "down" and it still reads funny. Sounds like Fonkin is bouncing.
I couldn't find the other duplicated words JD referenced, maybe I'm just blind. Otherwise made all corrections along with cleaning up and scaling to 300DPI the title page image.
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I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.
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By the way... DC1 is smaller than I usually prefer to print, but I think it's big enough and good enough to be worth it. Once we beat any remaining issues out of it, I'd like to see about doing just that.
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Even if it costs more than paperback, perhaps at least saddle-stitch?
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Have done so. I found the other duplicate words and have corrected a few other spots as I re-read; I'll send R6 soon.Solomoriah wrote:I pushed your new release to the server just a bit ago, Chi. Please download it fresh before doing further corrections, as I fixed some copyright date issues and a few flow problems while I had it open.
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