DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

[Solomoriah]

Also, I just pushed R10 to the downloads page. Give it a once-over, if you would. Thanks!

[chiisu81]

Page 7: 18. Watchdogs - needs a colon after (to maintain consistency with room names/headers)
Page 16-17: 9b. through 13. - Same
Page 22: 2. Musty Bedroom - Same
Page 24: 6. through 10. - Same

[Solomoriah]

And now I'm pushing R11 to the downloads page...

The "SURPRISE!" room didn't get a colon; I consider this a valid deviation. The others are all fixed, and I also fixed a bunch of commas with a space in front of them (all in stat strings for monsters).

[dymondy2k]

Sorry I missed this.. Looks good to me in black!

[Solomoriah]

Great, thanks! Now, if Chi will give the R11 PDF his blessing, I'll get this uploaded to Lulu and CreateSpace!

[chiisu81]

Intro: change to "... three-part adventure series..."
Page 26, #9: room header needs a colon

Otherwise looks good!

[Solomoriah]

... so now, R12.

I changed the flow a bit, so eye it closely please.

[chiisu81]

Looks good to me

[Solomoriah]

Excellent! I'll try to get this out in print tonight, or perhaps tomorrow night.

[Solomoriah]

Okay, it's done! DC1 is now updated to the new, dark-covered 2nd Edition R12 on Lulu.com, and will be available on CreateSpace.com and Amazon.com tomorrow.