Checking over R31 this morning.Solomoriah wrote:I don't know if Chi is looking at this right now, so I'll hold off applying your corrections until I hear from him.
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Hey everyone! It's been a bit. There's a few pages that have some whitespace I could draw some stuff for. Just from a brief look, here's the pages I was thinking of
Elana magic user pg 39
Blackthorn cudgel pg 41
Kosuke or Fujiko face? pg 54
pit trapped corridor pg 55
laboratory- bottles & such pg 75
Doppleganger mirror pg 111
Elana magic user pg 39
Blackthorn cudgel pg 41
Kosuke or Fujiko face? pg 54
pit trapped corridor pg 55
laboratory- bottles & such pg 75
Doppleganger mirror pg 111
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Indeed Welcome back Al!
Working on R32 right now.
Working on R32 right now.
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Going over your revised R32, and I noticed you worked on standardizing the NPC statblocks (which I'll admit, I kept changing as I went along). I've decided I like it this way:
Yunkers: Human Magic-User 6, AC 11, #At 1, Dam 1d3, Mv 40', Ml 9, XP 555
I don't like the race/class/level in parens; I'd rather have it be as shown above. I'm revising R32 to this standard, but we'll have to review it to make sure I haven't missed any.
Yunkers: Human Magic-User 6, AC 11, #At 1, Dam 1d3, Mv 40', Ml 9, XP 555
I don't like the race/class/level in parens; I'd rather have it be as shown above. I'm revising R32 to this standard, but we'll have to review it to make sure I haven't missed any.
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Elena's AC was listed as 9. Elona has 10, but she also has a penalty Dexterity; Elana's AC is 11, which is correct for unarmored magic-user characters. I think Elena should have been AC 11, and as of now she is.
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Uploaded R32. Besides the other things I mentioned above, I noticed and rewrote a bunch of singular-they usages in the bit about Charlotte and her poignard, so you might look that over and see if I screwed it up. I think your other changes all looked pretty good, Chi.
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Thanks Chii! Posted a picture of Fujiko over in the art thread. Have some more stuff I'll finish over the weekend.
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Page 35:-
Gilbert the Footman (Normal Man): --> Gilbert the Footman: Normal man,
Philippe Beauclerc (Normal Man): --> Philippe Beauclerc: Normal man,
Page 45:- (for consistency)
Fortescue Fauntleroy: AC 11, NM, --> Fortescue Fauntleroy: Normal man, AC 11,
Page 83-84: One paragraph (that crosses both pages) is not justified.
Copyright page: Giant trapdoor spider was by yours truly iirc?
Gilbert the Footman (Normal Man): --> Gilbert the Footman: Normal man,
Philippe Beauclerc (Normal Man): --> Philippe Beauclerc: Normal man,
Page 45:- (for consistency)
Fortescue Fauntleroy: AC 11, NM, --> Fortescue Fauntleroy: Normal man, AC 11,
Page 83-84: One paragraph (that crosses both pages) is not justified.
Copyright page: Giant trapdoor spider was by yours truly iirc?
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