The Unusual Predicament of Sophie De Murtas

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Lemme know when you're done...
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... and so I got tired of waiting. P&P, go ahead and post further updates in this thread if you like, but I'd like to go ahead and get Chi on editing this.

Chi, you listening? :D

Note for the editor: Stuart is from the UK. Please leave the spelling in the document in the UK mode (armour, colour, etc.) However, we will be changing spell-related usages of memorise, not because of the spelling but because we say "preparing" in BFRPG.
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r2 uploaded to first post.
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Wow, that was quick!
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Anyone ever noticed this? How as soon as someone makes a .pdf of your own writing, you instantly spot a whole cohort of your own mistakes?

Global find replace, "----" for an em-dash.

At end, insert monster entry for Sapient Glyph.

Generally, put spell names and magic items in bold (particularly on page 8)

Page 3, possible to encounter vrocks and hezrous, so we need stat blocks (of average hit points).

Page 6, second column: "This magical weapon weapon ..." --> "This magical weapon, which can only be wielded two-handed, ..."
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Lack of random encounters en route is lame, sorry, and full of fail. Anyone fancy helping me out by writing up some interesting random encounters?
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Oooh, yes, if you do fancy helping out and getting your name in lights on the credits... one of the random encounters needs to be Sir Guillaume the Drunken Knight, who insists on jousting with anyone wearing armour, plus his little party (squire, herald, valet, page, minstrel and three footmen, or indeed foot-women if you're inclined to disregard gender stereotypes). Want him in the adventure somewhere because his brother's in room #3 of the dungeon.
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Chi, if you want to handle P&P's updates, feel free. Do whatever you're comfortable with, and post a list of whatever remains unfinished.
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R3 posted wih Stuart's corrections along with additional corrections.
PapersAndPaychecks wrote:Oooh, yes, if you do fancy helping out and getting your name in lights on the credits... one of the random encounters needs to be Sir Guillaume the Drunken Knight, who insists on jousting with anyone wearing armour, plus his little party (squire, herald, valet, page, minstrel and three footmen, or indeed foot-women if you're inclined to disregard gender stereotypes). Want him in the adventure somewhere because his brother's in room #3 of the dungeon.
I'll look at this after R3 is posted, unless someone else wants to work on it first.

Also, made a post on FG2 thread about the Maggot Man's XP value.
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Wonder whether the new spells from room #5 need to be listed in the module as well.
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