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Re: CS2 The Pit
The discrepancy between the tower having fallen, and having disappeared in a single night, has to do with me moving part of the intro to one of the submitted adventures into the main introduction. Good catch, I'll clear it up.
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Okay, new rule: If you are going to make a pass through a document and correct punctuation and spacing, please DO NOT turn on track changes! Lordy, what a bunch of things to look at... still working through my R4 combining Chi's changes with mine, and I haven't even looked at bugleyman's.
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Question: Should we have a period after "ea" as in:
XP 550 ea
The edits I'm working through now are inconsistent. I like having the period, but I'm open to suggestions.
XP 550 ea
The edits I'm working through now are inconsistent. I like having the period, but I'm open to suggestions.
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... seriously, what is it with the rings of regeneration? Two so far. Wow.
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Re: CS2 The Pit
R5 posted.
I was doing it without the period, but I can see having it being "more valid". I'm working on a new release of the style guide and this will be included.Solomoriah wrote:Question: Should we have a period after "ea" as in:
XP 550 ea
The edits I'm working through now are inconsistent. I like having the period, but I'm open to suggestions.
I personally am starting to both like and depend on track changes. It's easier, at least for me, than trying to sift through a bunch of text on a forum post, if it's a lot of changes. A few of us have earned enough trust to work on things as-is, but ultimately I think track changes is the best way to show us (esp. you) exactly what was changed, in case there are still changes that are either incorrect or you don't agree upon, and you do still have the ultimate choice and say on the matter.Solomoriah wrote:Okay, new rule: If you are going to make a pass through a document and correct punctuation and spacing, please DO NOT turn on track changes! Lordy, what a bunch of things to look at... still working through my R4 combining Chi's changes with mine, and I haven't even looked at bugleyman's.
Re: CS2 The Pit
I thought there were a few instances of the treasure being disproportionate, but I didn't call them out as such. That struck me as an editorial decision that went well beyond my goal of clearing up the language.Solomoriah wrote:... seriously, what is it with the rings of regeneration? Two so far. Wow.
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Re: CS2 The Pit
Whoops, I didn't mean to break it!Solomoriah wrote:Okay, new rule: If you are going to make a pass through a document and correct punctuation and spacing, please DO NOT turn on track changes! Lordy, what a bunch of things to look at... still working through my R4 combining Chi's changes with mine, and I haven't even looked at bugleyman's.
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Re: CS2 The Pit
I second having the period; it's an abbreviation, after all.Solomoriah wrote:Question: Should we have a period after "ea" as in:
XP 550 ea
The edits I'm working through now are inconsistent. I like having the period, but I'm open to suggestions.
"If you want others to be happy, practice compassion. If you want to be happy, practice compassion."
-- The Dalai Lama
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Re: CS2 The Pit
Seems logical to me, but I'll defer to the boss.chiisu81 wrote: I personally am starting to both like and depend on track changes. It's easier, at least for me, than trying to sift through a bunch of text on a forum post, if it's a lot of changes. A few of us have earned enough trust to work on things as-is, but ultimately I think track changes is the best way to show us (esp. you) exactly what was changed, in case there are still changes that are either incorrect or you don't agree upon, and you do still have the ultimate choice and say on the matter.
"If you want others to be happy, practice compassion. If you want to be happy, practice compassion."
-- The Dalai Lama
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